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griffon8 · Post by **griffon8** » Sun Sep 29, 2013 6:41 am

Hanako Nakai wrote:
[1]> I’ll let her take the lead, considering that she rarely does that; and maybe her self-esteem might grow better.
[2]> I should take the lead tonight. I need to make this night perfect for Hanako.

Well, this is disappointing.

You're not writing a VN, you know. We don't need choices. You can get away with just writing your story.

Hanako Nakai · Post by **Hanako Nakai** » Sun Sep 29, 2013 6:52 am

griffon8 wrote:
Hanako Nakai wrote:
[1]> I’ll let her take the lead, considering that she rarely does that; and maybe her self-esteem might grow better.
[2]> I should take the lead tonight. I need to make this night perfect for Hanako.

Well, this is disappointing.

You're not writing a VN, you know. We don't need choices. You can get away with just writing your story.

That IS writing the story in my own way, the decision was to change point of view for the next part..

Numb · Post by **Numb** » Sun Sep 29, 2013 6:58 pm

Kind of disappointed to see this abandoned so soon, but I can see your reasoning. You don't feel ready to write a long project like this yet. That's perfectly fine, try one-shots until you are more confident in your abilities, it's a big project writing a route or epilogue with multiple chapters. Hell, Blossom is already about fifty pages long in my text editor, and about 20,000 words. It hasn't been easy, but I'm confident I can do it, and I hope eventually you feel the same about your own writing.
You have potential, you just lack the experience currently. Keep at it though, you'll make it!

dewelar · Post by **dewelar** » Sun Sep 29, 2013 7:06 pm

Also sorry to see this abandoned.

Hanako Nakai wrote:Deleted, sorry about bothering anyone with my useless writing.

However, I can't help but wonder if, given your screen name, this sign-off was meant to be significant

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OutofBlues · Post by **OutofBlues** » Sun Sep 29, 2013 7:35 pm

Numb wrote:Kind of disappointed to see this abandoned so soon, but I can see your reasoning. You don't feel ready to write a long project like this yet. That's perfectly fine, try one-shots until you are more confident in your abilities, it's a big project writing a route or epilogue with multiple chapters. Hell, Blossom is already about fifty pages long in my text editor, and about 20,000 words. It hasn't been easy, but I'm confident I can do it, and I hope eventually you feel the same about your own writing.
You have potential, you just lack the experience currently. Keep at it though, you'll make it!

You. I like you.

Shame I didn't get to read this, hope you decide to post it up again when you're feeling up to it.

griffon8 · Post by **griffon8** » Sun Sep 29, 2013 9:43 pm

Hanako Nakai wrote:Deleted, sorry about bothering anyone with my useless writing.

Wow.

I hope you write some more. As Helbereth and Mirage pointed out, your story certainly had potential.

Please take Numb's advice.

Comrade · Post by **Comrade** » Mon Sep 30, 2013 2:06 am

Well, i hope you do keep writing other stuff, you'll never get better if you quit altogether

TacticalBacon · Post by **TacticalBacon** » Mon Sep 30, 2013 2:23 am

aw :/ i was kinda looking forward to the sex scene

anywho, sad to see this end so soon, i enjoyed what you wrote.

Hanako Nakai · Post by **Hanako Nakai** » Mon Sep 30, 2013 9:35 am

i abandoned this not because i don't want to write anymore, i abandoned because i have limited time to spend... i think i would spend my remaining time with my relatives, it's never too late to change anything that happened to my family before, i must change it before i leave this plane...

Endofone · Post by **Endofone** » Mon Sep 30, 2013 10:57 pm

Ahh. This makes me kinda sad but, your choice so good luck on your later endeavors in life!

BlackWaltzTheThird · Post by **BlackWaltzTheThird** » Tue Oct 01, 2013 5:12 am

I never read what was in this thread - or at least, if I did, I do not recall doing so - but I assure you whole heartedly that no writing is useless, much less what was formerly here. Everything an author writes is another notch in his belt, if you will; a symbol of his growing experience and his steps towards improvement. You might not want to show it off - and that's fine; you are free to hide or display what you want - but please never see it as useless.

Hanako Nakai wrote:i abandoned this not because i don't want to write anymore, i abandoned because i have limited time to spend... i think i would spend my remaining time with my relatives, it's never too late to change anything that happened to my family before, i must change it before i leave this plane...

I might be reading this wrong, but it gives me a very morbid sense of unease. Whatever your situation may be, I wish you all the best for it. Godspeed.

Harrison · Post by **Harrison** » Sat Oct 05, 2013 10:19 pm

Sad to see this go as well

I completely understand about not having enough time to write though, as I find it increasingly difficult to find time to write as well. Just whatever you do, don't give up completely. I'll still be happy to proof-read anything that you might want proofread in the future

Vindicator N · Post by **Vindicator N** » Thu Oct 31, 2013 4:49 pm

Okay, let me get this straight. First of all, I'm still alive, and yes I'm the same dude.. i forgot the password to my old account. my computer's hard drive got corrupt, i had to buy a new one. and lastly, I may have something near yuletide season.. i'll update y'all..

Steinherz · Post by **Steinherz** » Thu Oct 31, 2013 5:11 pm

Vindicator N wrote:Okay, let me get this straight. First of all, I'm still alive, and yes I'm the same dude.. i forgot the password to my old account. my computer's hard drive got corrupt, i had to buy a new one. and lastly, I may have something near yuletide season.. i'll update y'all..

Hence why I keep all of my passwords for everything written down/easily memorable.
Good to know you're all right though friendo

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