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- Hanako Nakai
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Am I really that dense?
Re: [Hanako] Rebirth *UPDATED Part 4 Frag 1 29/9
Well, this is disappointing.Hanako Nakai wrote:
[1]> I’ll let her take the lead, considering that she rarely does that; and maybe her self-esteem might grow better.
[2]> I should take the lead tonight. I need to make this night perfect for Hanako.
You're not writing a VN, you know. We don't need choices. You can get away with just writing your story.
I found out about Katawa Shoujo through the forums of Misfile. There, I am the editor of Misfiled Dreams.
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Completed: 100%, including bonus picture. Shizune>Emi>Lilly>Hanako>Rin
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- Hanako Nakai
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Re: [Hanako] Rebirth *UPDATED Part 4 Frag 1 29/9
That IS writing the story in my own way, the decision was to change point of view for the next part..griffon8 wrote:Well, this is disappointing.Hanako Nakai wrote:
[1]> I’ll let her take the lead, considering that she rarely does that; and maybe her self-esteem might grow better.
[2]> I should take the lead tonight. I need to make this night perfect for Hanako.
You're not writing a VN, you know. We don't need choices. You can get away with just writing your story.
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Kind of disappointed to see this abandoned so soon, but I can see your reasoning. You don't feel ready to write a long project like this yet. That's perfectly fine, try one-shots until you are more confident in your abilities, it's a big project writing a route or epilogue with multiple chapters. Hell, Blossom is already about fifty pages long in my text editor, and about 20,000 words. It hasn't been easy, but I'm confident I can do it, and I hope eventually you feel the same about your own writing.
You have potential, you just lack the experience currently. Keep at it though, you'll make it!![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif)
You have potential, you just lack the experience currently. Keep at it though, you'll make it!
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Old works| Rooftops - An Emi Story| Christmas with the Hakamichis | Not Like Him - Rin Perspective|Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route
I did KS and other songs on note blocks in Minecraft: Playlist here
Old works| Rooftops - An Emi Story| Christmas with the Hakamichis | Not Like Him - Rin Perspective|Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route
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Also sorry to see this abandoned.
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However, I can't help but wonder if, given your screen name, this sign-off was meant to be significantHanako Nakai wrote:Deleted, sorry about bothering anyone with my useless writing.
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Stuff I've written: Developments, a continuation of Lilly's (bad? neutral?) ending - COMPLETE!
Stuff I've written: Developments, a continuation of Lilly's (bad? neutral?) ending - COMPLETE!
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You. I like you.Numb wrote:Kind of disappointed to see this abandoned so soon, but I can see your reasoning. You don't feel ready to write a long project like this yet. That's perfectly fine, try one-shots until you are more confident in your abilities, it's a big project writing a route or epilogue with multiple chapters. Hell, Blossom is already about fifty pages long in my text editor, and about 20,000 words. It hasn't been easy, but I'm confident I can do it, and I hope eventually you feel the same about your own writing.
You have potential, you just lack the experience currently. Keep at it though, you'll make it!
Shame I didn't get to read this, hope you decide to post it up again when you're feeling up to it.
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Wow.Hanako Nakai wrote:Deleted, sorry about bothering anyone with my useless writing.
I hope you write some more. As Helbereth and Mirage pointed out, your story certainly had potential.
Please take Numb's advice.
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Completed: 100%, including bonus picture. Shizune>Emi>Lilly>Hanako>Rin
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Completed: 100%, including bonus picture. Shizune>Emi>Lilly>Hanako>Rin
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Well, i hope you do keep writing other stuff, you'll never get better if you quit altogether
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- TacticalBacon
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aw :/ i was kinda looking forward to the sex scene
anywho, sad to see this end so soon, i enjoyed what you wrote.
anywho, sad to see this end so soon, i enjoyed what you wrote.
- Hanako Nakai
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i abandoned this not because i don't want to write anymore, i abandoned because i have limited time to spend... i think i would spend my remaining time with my relatives, it's never too late to change anything that happened to my family before, i must change it before i leave this plane...
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You should be a protagonist of a new story
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Ahh. This makes me kinda sad but, your choice so good luck on your later endeavors in life!
- BlackWaltzTheThird
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I never read what was in this thread - or at least, if I did, I do not recall doing so - but I assure you whole heartedly that no writing is useless, much less what was formerly here. Everything an author writes is another notch in his belt, if you will; a symbol of his growing experience and his steps towards improvement. You might not want to show it off - and that's fine; you are free to hide or display what you want - but please never see it as useless.
I might be reading this wrong, but it gives me a very morbid sense of unease. Whatever your situation may be, I wish you all the best for it. Godspeed.Hanako Nakai wrote:i abandoned this not because i don't want to write anymore, i abandoned because i have limited time to spend... i think i would spend my remaining time with my relatives, it's never too late to change anything that happened to my family before, i must change it before i leave this plane...
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BlackWaltz's Pastebin - for those who prefer to read things with no formatting and stuff. It's mostly the same as in my thread. Also contains assorted other writing!
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Sad to see this go as well
I completely understand about not having enough time to write though, as I find it increasingly difficult to find time to write as well. Just whatever you do, don't give up completely. I'll still be happy to proof-read anything that you might want proofread in the future ![Wink :wink:](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
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- Vindicator N
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Okay, let me get this straight. First of all, I'm still alive, and yes I'm the same dude.. i forgot the password to my old account. my computer's hard drive got corrupt, i had to buy a new one. and lastly, I may have something near yuletide season.. i'll update y'all..
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Hence why I keep all of my passwords for everything written down/easily memorable.Vindicator N wrote:Okay, let me get this straight. First of all, I'm still alive, and yes I'm the same dude.. i forgot the password to my old account. my computer's hard drive got corrupt, i had to buy a new one. and lastly, I may have something near yuletide season.. i'll update y'all..
Good to know you're all right though friendo
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