Epilogue (Lilly And Hisao Fan Fiction)

[Plague]

For what it's worth, I enjoyed reading your little "story" and the numerous grammar errors didn't bother me at all., nor did the odd lay-out for that matter. Because it was irrelevant. The story, that's all I cared about, and I liked it.
I carefully read all the critisism.
The car crash, too much of a coincidence? Don't think so, considering its fiction. Besides, how much of a coincidence is it that all the disabled girls in the story are so attractive...
The ending I had no trouble understanding at all, I immediatelly understood they were both dead.
Bringing in the 2 corpses was unrealistic? No, in my opinion it was to make Hisao believe they were still alive and sleeping.
Maybe you could make some endings for other characters?
Because some of us, readers, do like it.

Umm, really? 1 post ever posted? Maybe I'm paranoid, but this is too strange

[Mamen]

For what it's worth, I enjoyed reading your little "story" and the numerous grammar errors didn't bother me at all., nor did the odd lay-out for that matter. Because it was irrelevant. The story, that's all I cared about, and I liked it.
I carefully read all the critisism.
The car crash, too much of a coincidence? Don't think so, considering its fiction. Besides, how much of a coincidence is it that all the disabled girls in the story are so attractive...
The ending I had no trouble understanding at all, I immediatelly understood they were both dead.
Bringing in the 2 corpses was unrealistic? No, in my opinion it was to make Hisao believe they were still alive and sleeping.
Maybe you could make some endings for other characters?
Because some of us, readers, do like it.

Umm, really? 1 post ever posted? Maybe I'm paranoid, but this is too strange

Yeah, I just noticed how suspicious it looks xD, but I find I nice she/he made an account to voice his/her opinion.

[katt]

I guess one post has to be my first one, and I thought my humble opinion was worth subscribing here Does that look suspicious? Strange.

[griffon8]

Just in case you're not clear on what the suspicion is about, the question is over whether or not you (katt) are a sock puppet for the OP.

[Mamen]

Just in case you're not clear on what the suspicion is about, the question is over whether or not you (katt) are a sock puppet for the OP.

Why is it shocking I got good feedback? That hurts man.

[Mirage_GSM]

While I don't agree with Katt, I don't think he and Mamen are the same person. (His post has way less mistakes than the OP's)
I'm out of here before this escalates even further.
The OP doesn't want advice, so there's not really any reason for me to post anything else here.