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by Numb
Tue Nov 19, 2013 4:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 99123

Re: Blossom - Chapter One: Space-time Out [Part One]

I have returned! Though I won't be posting with my previous frequency. I'm recovering from a small writers block currently, and I also have school to deal with. However, I have decided to reformat my methods of posting these chapters, meaning that each one will be exactly three parts in length with ...
by Numb
Sun Nov 17, 2013 12:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 50
Views: 21052

Re: -

Vindicator N wrote:looking forward to it myself.. the plots been set, i'm just looking for some spare time to write it...
Time. That's something I wish I had more of too. I've given myself such a heavy workload between writing Blossom, attending school, making videos and learning Japanese :lol:
by Numb
Sun Nov 10, 2013 7:40 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random minor things that appeal to you
Replies: 88
Views: 36244

Re: Random minor things that appeal to you

I'd just like a place where I'm not the only one with a condition. Being with other people who have some form of disability is comforting, even if it's only for a minute. That aside, I'd like a school that appreciated the festivals and how much work goes into them. Where I live (Scotland) that never...
by Numb
Tue Nov 05, 2013 7:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Who has the most PTSD?
Replies: 44
Views: 17677

Re: Who has the most PTSD?

Speaking of Emi's response to trauma, her thoughts on "I'm so sorry" (U COULDN'T HAVE DONE ANYTHING NEWAY) vs. "These things happen" (I wish more people were callous!) always kind of annoyed me. Is it bad that the "these things happen" line was the only one I really re...
by Numb
Thu Oct 31, 2013 6:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 383345

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive - 30/10/13

Congratulations on getting the sticky Comrade! This archive has been incredibly useful, and it allows even fics on the fifth page to get some attention. Thanks for taking the time to do this, we all appreciate it :D
by Numb
Tue Oct 29, 2013 7:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 99123

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 10/10/2013]

Yet another update on goings on in the development of the next act. Recently I haven't been able to get any work done on the notes for the act, due to the recent death of my grandmother. Now please, don't send your condolences, I personally am not affected much, though I have been supporting those i...
by Numb
Mon Oct 28, 2013 12:45 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Healthy habits you picked up after playing KS
Replies: 52
Views: 21311

Re: Healthy habits you picked up after playing KS

I've spent more time following my passion (writing) now, probably because of Rin. I also started learning Japanese, but I can't remember if it was KS or Little Busters that made me want to do that :lol:
by Numb
Sat Oct 26, 2013 8:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 21843

Re: A Molly route. Update 26/10/13

Writing explicit death in first person is near impossible to do, though we do try. Until we can ask somebody what the feeling of death is like, nobody will ever get it right, which is why I prefer implicit deaths like the one in "Rooftops". One thing I will say, always do your research. Wh...
by Numb
Sat Oct 26, 2013 4:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rooftops (An Emi Story)
Replies: 32
Views: 16176

Re: Rooftops (An Emi Story)

Your writing style is more a jumpy poetic than smooth narrative. It works okay for something this short, but much longer and it can be too disjointed. Someone commented about not liking how so many of the short stories on the forum have a sad ending. I don't think most of us write with the 'intent'...
by Numb
Sat Oct 26, 2013 5:17 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Making a VN out of Katawa shoujo fanfics!
Replies: 27
Views: 18435

Re: Making a VN out of Katawa shoujo fanfics!

Upon its completion, I grant rights to implement Blossom. I can also proofread others work should it be required.
by Numb
Thu Oct 24, 2013 10:58 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If you were on a date with a character...
Replies: 101
Views: 32443

Re: If you were on a date with a character...

Probably Suzu, just because she is known to like literature. The dates would probably just be hangout sessions in her room or my room, reading and talking about stuff. She seems like a really laid back character from all of the interpretations, and I like that :D

Oh, and welcome to the forums :lol:
by Numb
Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 21843

Re: A Molly route.

Also Thanks to Numb, Your start on the miki route is actually what gave me the idea to give it a shot :D I... I inspired somebody? So happy *sniff* Honestly though, balancing schoolwork and writing isn't the best idea. I barely manage it myself, but give it time and you will fall into a good balanc...
by Numb
Tue Oct 22, 2013 4:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 21843

Re: A Molly route.

The concern in her voice is painfully obvious (Rather than hurtfully) “N-no please don’t . ” (Period in place of previous comma) Other than those minor errors, this is fairly decent. I would probably increase the size of these posts in future though, it was a very short read. I really hope you know...
by Numb
Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 99123

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 10/10/2013]

Req wrote:well... finished it yet
Not quite. One particularly dull chapter (in note form) has been giving me some trouble. I need to find a way to jazz it up a bit, otherwise I will bore you guys to tears with it :lol:
by Numb
Sat Oct 19, 2013 11:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 99123

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 10/10/2013]

Don't worry guys, I'm making sure to take my time with the next act. Laying out the notes carefully, timing included this time. I won't be posting for a while yet though, returning to school tomorrow, so won't have as much time as I have for the past two weeks to work on the project. Luckily I only ...