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Sad to see this go as well :( I completely understand about not having enough time to write though, as I find it increasingly difficult to find time to write as well. Just whatever you do, don't give up completely. I'll still be happy to proof-read anything that you might want proofread in the ...

I definitely see improvement when comparing part one to part 2, which is obviously good. Only a couple comments/typos. -You used the word "I" 72 times in total, so you should try to cut those down a bit. A good idea is to just write the part with whatever words comes to mind, and then go back and re ...

Maybe it's late on a Friday, Hanako is locked in her room with a laptop and a case of Red Bull, trying to write an essay for her Abnormal Psychology class, while Hisao repeatedly attempts to coax her into abandoning her futile efforts and join him for a movie. It's a plausible situation involving a ...

I enjoyed this thoroughly my good sir. Thank you for writing it.

For a first fan fic, I think you did pretty well. If you're planning on continuing (which it sounds like you are), then I think it has potential to turn into a great story line. Also, I get the feeling that you're "telling" the story, rather than "showing" it. By "showing" your story (Better word ...

I really enjoyed reading this. Are you planning on continuing this in the future? If so, I will gladly read it!

Sea wrote:All fics should be written in Cherokee. Much more understandable.

I completely agree.

Just finished reading all that's posted. Thanks for helping me get here, and I really like what I've read. I can't wait for the next pats. Also, the dialog seems to be realistic, so good job.

Happy birthday Hanako! Anyone know what she's turning? Sorry I lost track.

The songs that moved me the most probably include: Jitter Breathlessly Romance in Andante Moment of Decision Painful History I also really enjoyed: Red Velvet Ah eh I oh you Air Guitar ...and pretty much every other song of the soundtrack :P On a side note, I'm ironically listening to the soundtrack ...

I don't have words for how good that was. I really like how it's not just about Hanako and Hisao having sex like rabbits, and it also shows the perspective of many characters. Terrific Job.

Before reading KS, I hardly cried about anything. Sadly, when someone at a nearby school was killed in a car crash, I felt somewhat unemotional about it. It's not that I didn't think it was worth crying about, I just didn't really know how to respond to it. At the final scene of Hanako's good ending ...

After completing the game, I obsessed over learning every song on both guitar and piano. I've only got about 7 more songs to go!