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Why yes, but while there may not be a cure for many sufferers there is always medication to mitigate the symptoms . When I started this story, I did a lot of research. I then forgot almost all of it. I'm forgetful like that, so my bad. You're right, some painkillers would temporarily alleviate phan...

Yay! A lovely brief powerful instalment. Sometimes I wish I could write Miki like that. From what I've read of your work, I think you certainly can! /fanboy But it wouldn't be KS without everybody involved tossing the idiot ball everwhere. I like this excuse. I'm not a fan of using it, and I'd pref...

>Tell him about your phantom pains.< Hisao is my friend, and my phantom pains aren’t that big a deal, so I decide to just tell him. Now all I’ve got to do is actually figure out what to say. I consider a lot of different phrasings, but eventually decide to just keep it short. <Phantom pains.> <Ouch...

>Lie about why you're up.< I shouldn’t even be thinking about this, I keep these details secret for a reason. Even Suzu doesn’t know everything about this side of me, so why should Hisao? This is the kind of thing that’s better if I just keep it to myself; it’s been that way for as long as I’ve bee...

I hate seeing the contours of my room in the dark, but it takes me a second to remember why. And, right on cue, my left hand begins to clench, and I swear I can feel my nails digging into my palms, the cries of my skin matching the seizing in my muscles. I’m pretty sure my hand never actually hurt t...

>Cover< The temperature becomes milder as the week goes on, and by Saturday afternoon it’s pleasant and slightly breezy. It’s nice to be out on a day like this, the sun warming my back and the school week behind me, and not just because I’m done with class for the week, either. Class today actually...

Hey, guess who just finished a scene? And not just any scene, either - first of all, this scene used to be something like 15k words, so I cut it into two, but more importantly, this is the first scene to include a choice! Now, I understand that y’all are probably a little less excited about that tha...

I recognize them at once: Lilly Satou (blind) Hisao Nakai (cardiac arrhythmia), and Hanako Ikezawa (burn victim, stutter, social anxiety disorder). I imagined this playing out like in Watch Dogs, where time slowed down a little and his eyes flicked between them, with little text appearing next to t...

If you update your story in episodes, chapters, etc. where it can take some time between each release, before you release a new chapter, re-read the previous two and the new one all in one chunk as part of your proofreading. This will also help you write in general; past around 10k words you lose t...

Team Water? Who would even be on that team?! Me, for one. Water is almost all I drink(I don't even drink coffee in the morning). Power, my water-loving friend. I haven't drank (drunk?) anything but water for about the past decade, if not a bit more - a feat made slightly more impressive by the fact...

Lovely, as expected! I was expecting a bit more surprise/thought on Seiki's part when she discovers that Lilly knows who she is, but it played out well nonetheless. Your Hisao also looks like a good fit for this story, and I can't wait to see how that progresses, keep up the good work! Also, Seiki s...

If you update your story in episodes, chapters, etc. where it can take some time between each release, before you release a new chapter, re-read the previous two and the new one all in one chunk as part of your proofreading. This will also help you write in general; past around 10k words I lose the...

Wow, flippin' lovely, I don't usually get far into fics involving Lilly, but this was extremely well-written, and I love the concept, even if it's a little on the impossible side; I'm hooked, so write on, if you please. This, I find utterly fascinating. The difference between void and blackness, to ...

It looks good, I'm glad to see more!

And christ, that girl was a right arse. I hope we run into her again. Revenge?

... but that's more wishful thinking than anything.

I didn't mean for you to delete your story. Sure, I wasn't huge on the style, as I said, but I would have kept reading. I still enjoyed the characters. I was unfortunate enough to start reading, begin enjoying it, stop reading because I had stuff to do, come back a day later, and be left hanging. I...