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So I stopped keeping up with this story a few months ago. I had wondered many times if I should come back to it, only to back out every time. Finally, sitting in the airport with 90 minutes to kill, I came back. Ordinarily I'd be sad to have missed so many updates, but honestly, I'm quite glad that ...

Alright, let me see if I can describe this in the correct amount of detail. Imagine that you and your friend are American football fans, and you take your football out to a nearby field every weekend to throw around. You're both working on power and precision, seeing how far and how accurately you c...

Mirage_GSM wrote:Personally I like asteriskses (or whatever the plural of that is)

I've always been a fan of "astrices", much like matrix goes to matrices, even though it's technically not quite the same structure.

Alright, finally got around to being able to reply, so here I am: good job! I'll admit there were some issues early on, but those were mostly because of the spelling mistakes, which skewed my perception a little. Besides those (and unfortunately it's been a few days since I read so I don't know whic...

Lovely! Felt a little short but I'm guessing that's because the ending cut off so abruptly, or because a fair amount of text was spent in a flashback. I'm liking the time being put into backstory, I didn't think I'd be fond of a break in our protagonist's actions but here I am. Oh, and regarding thi...

I enjoyed this piece, I think you did a good job emphasizing certain elements, and you seem to have your characters down pat. That said, I do have to agree with what other people have said; the two chapters seem very disconnected, and there were a number of grammatical errors, to the extent that by ...

On one hand, I never really understand why so many of these fics seemed to use this exact device - for example, M&M (although it's kinda unclear which parts are dreamed and which are real) uses the same kind of moment - everyone's having a nice, sad little time, then *whoops*! On the other hand,...

Personally, I love this story - in a strange, makes-me-want-to-cry way. It almost feels at this point like the story aspect where everything is wrong - it focuses on stressed characters dealing with their problems as they progress, and approaching their breaking points. I think this entire section w...

Aaaaah lovely lovely lovely, I'm a big fan. Two things: After the time I the hospital, I've grown a centimeter or two. That one time I accidentally the whole hospital... ...and I can't find the second thing. I should really write these things down as I see them. Regardless, this was a great scene, b...

Well, I'm glad that peope seemed to enjoy the content, if not the format, of this release - but on to the problems. See that's why I hate branches in fanfictions. This was a good reading, but unfortunately I must agree with Mirage_GSM - choices do not work out in fanfic format. I'll admit that this ...

Ah, you've managed to transfer it all to forum format; now I can finally post here without feeling bad! Anyways, I read the whole story on GDrive and absolutely loved it. Your plot was well-thought out, and your writing seemed quite immersive. I don't remember seeing any errors, although that was a ...

Loved it! I would've preferred a bit more honesty from Seiki, but you know where you're going with this, so I trust that we'll all get somewhere eventually.

Keep up the good work!

I drive myself across the finish line, baton in hand, and for the fourth time today I can finally bring myself out of the running mentality and focus on coming to a stop. This is my last race today, and I’m glad it went pretty well. Really well, actually; “In first place, Yamaku Team 1!” I haven’t b...

After a while, Hisao mentioned that I should probably go back and try to sleep if I could, and he was right - some sleep is better than no sleep at all. So I grabbed my sweater, slipped it on, and walked back to the dorms. Well, I walked most of the way; a short sprint to the doors couldn’t hurt, ri...

>Structural Integrity< The trek over here in the cool night air has given me a bit of a chance to calm down, and my pains were eased just a little by the swift walking that I did to make it into the boys’ dorms. That was an acute reminder of how much I hate walking when I could be running, but beca...