Katawa Shoujo Forums

Squee.

Th.... thank you?

I liked this chapter, though kinda disappointed the nurse did not pick up on her finding his office by herself.

Gajzla wrote:I liked this chapter, though kinda disappointed the nurse did not pick up on her finding his office by herself.

Yeah, I was looking forward to what he had to say about that too.

Anyways, I'm glad Seiki finally told Hisao she has amnesia. I'm not a big fan of people hiding their disability from their friends.

Hmm... perhaps doctor-patient confidentiality? The Nurse wouldn't want Hisao knowing what he isn't supposed to know.

bubeez wrote:Hmm... perhaps doctor-patient confidentiality? The Nurse wouldn't want Hisao knowing what he isn't supposed to know.

Didn't think about that. That actually makes sense.

azumeow wrote:Squee.

Seconded! This fic is just so adorable.

AntonSlavik020 wrote:

Gajzla wrote:I liked this chapter, though kinda disappointed the nurse did not pick up on her finding his office by herself.

Yeah, I was looking forward to what he had to say about that too.

Anyways, I'm glad Seiki finally told Hisao she has amnesia. I'm not a big fan of people hiding their disability from their friends.

Hisao in most routes that aren't Emi's?

I'm going to try and make cover art soon. Although I'm afraid to crush all of your headcanons lol. I've been avoiding appearance for quite a while.

Drew this to procrastinate lol. I really need to learn how to properly shade

I love the art there, especially the cheesy high-schools romance initials on the tree.

Glad I found this fic, it's pretty cute!

Thanks, it means a lot to hear that

I guess it’s about time I comment on this.

Now that you’ve gotten this far, you’re showing talent. I didn’t like the choppy style at first, but it fits so well with your OC. Also, I think you’ve gotten better at it, finding a balance between abruptness and… progress? Not sure what I’m trying to convey with that thought. Anyway, it’s better.

One typo I noticed:

Dream-like, but so realistic its terrifyingly beautiful.

A rare one; usually people are guilty of putting in an apostrophe when they aren’t supposed to.

Progress? I'll take it Thank you!

I've definitely conflicted with the writing style. There was a point in the story where I lost my footing. I lost faith in the fact that the reader could continue each chapter as if no time had passed since the last one, and I kept writing as if each chapter needed to be standalone... but that really breaks the abrupt writing style and Seiki's lofty-headed viewpoint.

So, dear readers. (it's been a while since I've called you all that!) Thanks for being patient with me. And I won't lose faith in you all. Next chapter soon!