Nightmares

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Esa94
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Mag wrote:
Elroy wrote:"Ouch! Can't I even get to my room without running into some assho-"



Why does this look remotely familiar to me?


Also, to actually comment on the story, it was awesome. And that Onawa was certainly an interesting character :3
Lol silly Esa.
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Mag
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Esa94 wrote:Does pointing out references make me silly?
No. Its just something I say when someone points something out. Drives my friends crazy sometimes.
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ELROYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

Cool. Nice end.
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Month too late, but for once, not caring.

Cause you know what?

My mind has been blown.


Elroy, you are a Master of the Arts. I look forward to what else is hidden in your little grey cells.
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I could say this is the best horrorstory I've ever read, but that wouldn't mean very much, because I don't read horror stories very much.
So instead I say that this is one of the best fanfictions I ever read, even if I never played Silent Hill or RE, so I probably missed tons of references.
The story is incredibly well written, very imaginative and every last character is spot on. Also, it's a nice change from the genre KS fanfics generally lend themselves to.
I'm surprised nobody mentioned this yet, but I thought it was very fitting to inflict all the diabilities of the girls and Hisao upon the Big Bad to kill him.
I wonder how long Hisao could keep his harem going before they are at each other's throats though...

One (very) minor point: Hisao's room is located in a dead end corridor. Noone but him and Kenji live there, so it's surprising so many students are passing this way at the end... Like I said, no biggie ;-)
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Mirage_GSM wrote:<praise>
You might want to notice that Elroy hasn't been in here for at least two months. (I sent him a PM on the third of June and it's still in my outbox :D)
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magnificent i loved this story tell me if you make any more horror KS story's :D
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Sorry for the necroing, but did anyone else notice the first letters of Onawa's previous names?

J-I-G-O-R-O. Holy shit.
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Well, I know I'm a little late, but that was awesome, I loved the part where Hisao is in the hospital in the dream. Congratulations to you, Elroy.
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