Gilrond wrote:I'm very impressed by this story, very well done Doomish. I actually kinda hope this was the final chapter, seems like the perfect place to stop.
The O.H.L. wrote:That was... pretty amazing by my standards. I don't know if it was just the 'edgy teen' in me that liked it or what, but I really really really enjoyed that. Now that seemed very final and all, but is it actually finished? Because you could very easily continue this story if it was.
Compliments are always appreciated, friends. As most of my stories have more than one act, so does this one as well. We are far past the midway point as there are only two or three chapters remaining (subject to change). I could have ended it here and my original intention was to do so, but sometimes the winds of change bring new patterns of thinking with them. Worry not, I won't draw this one out to a full-length novella especially given that the chapters are only a few thousand words apiece, but I do have further plans for it. The iceburg has struck the ship; we must now watch it sink.