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mallory
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by mallory » Tue May 05, 2009 4:27 pm
I don't usually go around wantonly drawing fanart of anything, but I couldn't resist...
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Pimmy
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by Pimmy » Tue May 05, 2009 9:24 pm
I like it! Very cool style. Her expression strikes me a bit strange, but the overall smoothness is very nice! I like the thick outlines with the finer inner details.
EnigmaticThief
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by EnigmaticThief » Tue May 05, 2009 10:01 pm
Nice work, Mallory. There's a strange dichotomy to the way her posture suggests shying away, but her expression is very forward.
Envy
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by Envy » Thu May 07, 2009 9:28 am
If her shoulders went any further back I reckon they'd fall off but I do like it the style, colours and contrast of line work.
mallory
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by mallory » Thu May 07, 2009 11:00 am
Hmm~ thanks for the feedback guys, I only recently got into drawing with any seriousness so I'm trying to identify a style to develop...
Still needs lots of work in my eyes... -_-
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by Vertical » Thu May 07, 2009 10:56 pm
Lovely. Her proportions look great. Agree with Envy on the soulders. Her facial details are simple yet convey her timidity well. Gotta say the lips are my favorite part of this.
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mallory
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by mallory » Sat May 09, 2009 2:04 am
I tried out more of an anime style~
It came out quite nice, I think I'm making progress~
PCJedi
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by PCJedi » Sat May 09, 2009 3:19 am
Looking even better now! I like Rin's face. Oh, and by the way, looking at Hanako's pose in your earlier picture reminded me of this image...
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DeliciouslyAtrocious
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by DeliciouslyAtrocious » Sat May 09, 2009 7:45 am
Your lineart is just beautiful! You have a very awesome style.
The textured look on Hanako makes it seem like she's from a cel-shaded video game, haha!
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I read with the character introduction sentence of the official site and gave gooseflesh.
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Envy
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by Envy » Sat May 09, 2009 8:04 am
Rin sure has some crotch and thigh hugging trousers there. Her pupils are also dilated and HUEG.
None of these comments are complaints though. I want to sex up your art style.
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by Xevo » Sat May 09, 2009 10:38 pm
Only thing I see wrong with this is her mouth... Is she about to give a bj?
Other than that, she looks good.
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I approve.