Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

[Mountaineer]

Hello everyone, I drafted this fiction over the course of a 14 hour period on March 3rd - 4th. It's an epilogue to the Emi route good end. I hope that you enjoy it as much as I did writing it!

I'm just going to leave the pastebin link as the fiction is over 13,000 words long, and I figure that is too big to fit into one post

http://pastebin.com/cGFttahS

EDIT: Minor corrections made, ending adjusted to not be as abrupt and to be more comprehensive, grammatical errors fixed. Please let me know if you spot anything else!

EDIT2: I just got some amazing Emi fan-art made from a scene in the fiction. I am blown away by the quality. I am overly thankful to the two people who made the drawing possible!

http://i.imgur.com/6YE2o.png(Not nude, but possibly NSFW)
http://i.imgur.com/JiP2N.jpg (SFW)

[FishyBroski]

Awesome! Gotta go to work soon so I'll read it in the afternoon when I get home (:

[EDIT] Just read it through...All these feels T_T Thanks for writing this great fan-fic

[FluffandCrunch]

Read this earlier in /ksg/ and I really enjoyed it, Mountaineer.
You had us going for a while with a possible bad end. I'm glad to see you were gentle with us. All through the reading I kept thinking what could possibly go wrong?
Hisao manning up was inspiring.
Well done, Mountaineer. Well written and very true to the character's personalities.
:writer'shighfive:

[misterprinny]

I'm not a huge Emi fan, but I really loved this story. Good job sir

You should probably add a warning for sexual content, however. Some people don't like erotica (I was fine with it, added a nice touch to the story).

[Daitengu]

I gotta say, that was a good fanfic. The caliber of fics in these forums are quite high even if there is a difference of taste sometimes..

[Mountaineer]

I'm not a huge Emi fan, but I really loved this story. Good job sir

You should probably add a warning for sexual content, however. Some people don't like erotica (I was fine with it, added a nice touch to the story).

Thanks for the heads up man. I'll add a tag to the subject now.

Glad everyone enjoyed it! The best part of writing it being able to share your creations with others. I'll be writing again soon but first I going to be spending most of my time playing Mass Effect 3.

[misterprinny]

I'm not a huge Emi fan, but I really loved this story. Good job sir

You should probably add a warning for sexual content, however. Some people don't like erotica (I was fine with it, added a nice touch to the story).

Thanks for the heads up man. I'll add a tag to the subject now.

Glad everyone enjoyed it! The best part of writing it being able to share your creations with others. I'll be writing again soon but first I going to be spending most of my time playing Mass Effect 3.

Take your time sir. No need to keep a man from quality video gaming.

[YOTC]

My only complaint is that you don't just go "get" a new pair of legs. I build the things for a living and fit them to people. New legs are usually a MONTHS long process. Fastest I've done it for someone was 4 days but I had all the parts around to do it. Getting something like a Pathfinder foot takes at least 2-4 days shipping and I know my company can't afford to keep them in stock.

Other than that, fun story.

[Mountaineer]

My only complaint is that you don't just go "get" a new pair of legs. I build the things for a living and fit them to people. New legs are usually a MONTHS long process. Fastest I've done it for someone was 4 days but I had all the parts around to do it. Getting something like a Pathfinder foot takes at least 2-4 days shipping and I know my company can't afford to keep them in stock.

Other than that, fun story.

Oh! I tried to do some research before writing, including what hiking legs would actually look like. This is actually by no means the final revision of this tale, so I will be sure to edit the content to reflect the time it takes to get such a pair of legs made. Is there any more pertinent information I should know?

[Grand Haberdasher]

Nitpick: The phrase is "That's my cue to begin." Other than that, good story.

[Mountaineer]

Nitpick: The phrase is "That's my cue to begin." Other than that, good story.

Thanks! I'll be sure to fix it when I go through and do my major proofreading spree. Glad you enjoyed it!

[Lothbrok]

We do need more Emi stories in here she doesn't get enough love so I'm happy to read this also Hisao doing that feat makes me think

[Mountaineer]

We do need more Emi stories in here she doesn't get enough love so I'm happy to read this also Hisao doing that feat makes me think

Thanks for reading! I agree, we need more Emi she is love, after all!

[RinellaWasHere]

Quite impressive. Your writing, at first, hooked me more than your plot, but by the end I was hanging on every word. Well done, my friend- your story is part of my headcanon for the Emi route.

[Mountaineer]

Quite impressive. Your writing, at first, hooked me more than your plot, but by the end I was hanging on every word. Well done, my friend- your story is part of my headcanon for the Emi route.

Thanks for the feedback! You'll be pleased to know that I also updated the ending to add more flavor, and the possibility of a sequel. Enjoy, everyone!