Of Chocolate and Cupids

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And now Misha and Lilly.

That just about wraps it up. Happy Valentine's Day.
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Lilly's story reminded me of The Schwa Was Here (narrating a movie for GF) very sweet :lol: i loved all the stories, great job!!!
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themocaw wrote:
Bagheera wrote:Wait, nothing for Lilly? I liked seeing her harass Hisao, but still . . .
It's not done yet :)
Worth the wait. Misha is so cute. :D
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D'awwww and lol in equal measure. I approve.

Also, yay, 'Love Actually'.
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themocaw wrote: [You two stop flirting and get to work,] Shizune sighs.

["Don't be so uptight, Shiichan,"] Misha says. ["I have chocolate for you too!"] She tosses another box of candies to the Student Council President.

[You're only supposed to give these to boys, you know,] Shizune points out.

She opens the box and eats the candy anyway.
The jealousy is strong in this one!
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win, pure win. All of it!

Again I tip my hat to you themocaw, you have no idea how much I laughed at Hanako's part. Rin's has got to be the sweetest bit of all the sweet bits.

And I never knew that's how Valentine's Day worked in Japan, that clears up some things...it should really work that way everywhere else much more convenient if you ask me.
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I think it's quite ironic that people spend ages writing 30,000 word stories, when these are just as good, if not better :mrgreen:
Liked the Emi one best though.
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scott1and wrote:I think it's quite ironic that people spend ages writing 30,000 word stories, when these are just as good, if not better :mrgreen:
To be honest, though, these short fics only work because a bunch of other people did a 500,000 word story. Fanfic writers cheat like that.
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