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i might be be stupid or something, but can you point out what is wrong with each picture?
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I can see nothing wrond with the first, but on the second one it says "SHE'D judging me".
Hanako>Misha>Emi>Lilly>Shizune>Rin
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The first says "Would you to like to get something to eat..."
Really amazing that that one as never noticed before^^°
Really amazing that that one as never noticed before^^°
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune
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Holy shit I read that then I read this then I read that and I had to actually slowly read each word outloud because my brain was sorting them correctly when I gave it a quick look overMirage_GSM wrote:The first says "Would you to like to get something to eat..."
Really amazing that that one as never noticed before^^°
Also I just had the 2nd scene and didn't notice it but I did notice a tense issue previously with "I'd" I'd post it but I don't know where my screenshots go...
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The mind plays tricks on us.
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Seeing as they keep popping up, might as well register.
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I found a typo as well, if you ask the nurse for advice near the end of Emi's route the scene following it refers to the nurse as a "she"
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And, another:
Also this now seems like a combined effort to weed out all slip-ups.
Also this now seems like a combined effort to weed out all slip-ups.
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badly taken screenshot but w/e, "like you actually are sad" I guess
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That last one is very much Rin being Rin. On drugs.
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To be pedantic, these aren't so much spelling mistakes as they are grammar mistakes. I'm willing to overlook them if you guys are. Honestly, even after reading them a few times, I had a hard time seeing what the problem was, until it was pointed out. Well, except for the desk one. That's just the script writing being divorced from the art creation.