Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
yes! the ending is awesome. you know... this also sounds like: prostitution is good for your wallet
Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
THIS IS AWESOME.
Do you have any other ideas for stories? :3
Do you have any other ideas for stories? :3
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
I've got one started that literally begins with Kenji and Hisao making out.Esa94 wrote:THIS IS AWESOME.
Do you have any other ideas for stories? :3
...so yeah.
Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
If you were intending to besmirch the morality of every character in Katawa Shoujo, you missed four.
Pretty well written though.
Pretty well written though.
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
Hm, lets see here...SirMax wrote:If you were intending to besmirch the morality of every character in Katawa Shoujo, you missed four.
Hisao -Tranny prostitute.
Emi -Prostitute
Rin -Prostitute
Misha -Prostitute
Shizune -Prostitute
Hanako -Prostitute
Lilly -Madam
Muto -A John
Nomiya -A John
Akira -A... Jane?
So that leaves us with...
Mr. Nakai
Mrs. Nakai -Perfectly normal parents who acted predictably.
Iwanako -Hopefully less of a bitch because she felt bad about leaving Hisao
Kenji -No negative change...
...DAMMIT! You're right!
Edit: And Yuuko... Double dammit.
Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
Well done, guy. I got quite a few giggles out of this. Nice touch with the ending as well.
Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
Actually, Mr and Mrs Nakai were both reacted pretty badly to Hisao's supposed homosexuality, Iwanako made him crossdress for her own amusement, and Kenji was a whorelord. I meant Yuuko, Hisao's cardiologist, the guy who tells Lily to go ahead and hang out with Hisao and her ending, and the guy Shizune and Hisao talk into giving free games for the ball throwing game.kosherbacon wrote: Mr. Nakai
Mrs. Nakai -Perfectly normal parents who acted predictably.
Iwanako -Hopefully less of a bitch because she felt bad about leaving Hisao
Kenji -No negative change...
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
I lol'd.SirMax wrote: Hisao's cardiologist, the guy who tells Lily to go ahead and hang out with Hisao and her ending, and the guy Shizune and Hisao talk into giving free games for the ball throwing game.
For what it's worth...
Hisao's cardiologist beats his kid, Yuuko sells crack at Shanghai, Lilly's classmate started the fire that burned down Hanako's house for the lulz, and the ball throwing guy once downloaded a copyrighted MP3 off the internet(GIVE HIM THE CHAIR!).
Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
You just invoked my trope-o-vision.kosherbacon wrote:I lol'd.SirMax wrote: Hisao's cardiologist, the guy who tells Lily to go ahead and hang out with Hisao and her ending, and the guy Shizune and Hisao talk into giving free games for the ball throwing game.
For what it's worth...
Hisao's cardiologist beats his kid, Yuuko sells crack at Shanghai, Lilly's classmate started the fire that burned down Hanako's house for the lulz, and the ball throwing guy once downloaded a copyrighted MP3 off the internet(GIVE HIM THE CHAIR!).
..And I trapped myself in TVTropes for hours
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
I loled, hard. You can never catch a break with these can ya? Always got people coming in saying you missed something.kosherbacon wrote:I lol'd.SirMax wrote: Hisao's cardiologist, the guy who tells Lily to go ahead and hang out with Hisao and her ending, and the guy Shizune and Hisao talk into giving free games for the ball throwing game.
For what it's worth...
Hisao's cardiologist beats his kid, Yuuko sells crack at Shanghai, Lilly's classmate started the fire that burned down Hanako's house for the lulz, and the ball throwing guy once downloaded a copyrighted MP3 off the internet(GIVE HIM THE CHAIR!).
"Anyone can say they're your friend, few can prove it." -Me
Hanako >/= Lilly > Shizune > Emi > Rin
Currently:Finished all but Rin. Taking a break for now.
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Hanako >/= Lilly > Shizune > Emi > Rin
Currently:Finished all but Rin. Taking a break for now.
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
kosherbacon wrote:I lol'd.SirMax wrote: Hisao's cardiologist, the guy who tells Lily to go ahead and hang out with Hisao and her ending, and the guy Shizune and Hisao talk into giving free games for the ball throwing game.
For what it's worth...
Hisao's cardiologist beats his kid, Yuuko sells crack at Shanghai, Lilly's classmate started the fire that burned down Hanako's house for the lulz, and the ball throwing guy once downloaded a copyrighted MP3 off the internet(GIVE HIM THE CHAIR!).
You've now made every established character and person with a line in Katawa Shoujo less moral.
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
Yes!
Oh yeah, and the classmate who put Iwanako's love letter in Hisao's book? She drowns kittens for fun.
Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap
Noooooo! not the kittens! Let her drown little lawyers or politicians.kosherbacon wrote: Oh yeah, and the classmate who put Iwanako's love letter in Hisao's book? She drowns kittens for fun.
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais,
*tosses the spade*
Sorry for digging out this old thread I just had to say I loved the Story and the use of Characters.
And you missed another one It's the blind guy from Rins and Nomiyas art club (the one with the lack of bad luck).
Though you could say that you compensated that with Iwanakos math team.
Nice ending btw, probably best thing you could do to not clear everything up as it leaves space for imagination. Nice work, anyway.
Sorry for digging out this old thread I just had to say I loved the Story and the use of Characters.
And you missed another one It's the blind guy from Rins and Nomiyas art club (the one with the lack of bad luck).
Though you could say that you compensated that with Iwanakos math team.
Nice ending btw, probably best thing you could do to not clear everything up as it leaves space for imagination. Nice work, anyway.
Ranking after act 1:
Hanako > Rin >> Lilly > Shizune > Emi
I played the routes in that order, every ending and all.
Ranking after full playthrough:
Lilly > Emi >> Rin ~ Hanako > Shizune
Hanako > Rin >> Lilly > Shizune > Emi
I played the routes in that order, every ending and all.
Ranking after full playthrough:
Lilly > Emi >> Rin ~ Hanako > Shizune
Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais,
Not what I was expecting but a very interesting read.
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