Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

[bhtooefr]

Damnit, this thing again.

There's actually some elements of how Hanako would handle the aftermath of cheating on Hisao, that I think are in character (including her suicide attempt)... but her cheating on him in the first place (or being far enough out of her shell to do it) is quite a bit harder to see.

Now, I could also see her blaming herself to this extent for getting raped, especially if she was drugged and didn't remember what happened, just figured some things out after the fact. That would actually make the story somewhat plausible. But, the storyline would have to change, and it'd have to rely on Hanako not sharing her suspicions that she was raped (she's not stupid, she'd figure it out, but she would consider it cheating out of guilt), and Hisao figuring out what she was leaving out.

I actually find Doomish's incomplete story of how Hanako was SOLD INTO SEX SLAVERY after her bad end more believable.

[Lianam]

One picture : http://puu.sh/57MCB.png

Hmm...
*Looks at picture and see in the other tabs "Mojang - Twitch" and "My subscriptions - Youtube"*
*Looks at total post- notices it's low*
*Looks at joined date- notices it's recent*
...I take it you're a Mindcrack fan and you're here because of Millbee and- *looks at Millbee's videos, and note's the date of his "Where Have I Been" video and date of the video before it, compares it to the join date and notices it's between the two* you're here because you loved KS after downloading and playing because you had "KS withdrawal" due to his videos being on Hiatus; which were due to him getting over the sad feels of Emi's bad end.
Same story here btw...

I don't know why I bothered to do through all of that- actually no, I do: simply for imagining your reaction to thinking "Why did some guy on the internet bother going though all of that?"


Now about the story: Well-written but my god was it depressing.

[Mournful3ch0]

...I take it you're a Mindcrack fan and you're here because of Millbee

Though not charged, I am equally guilty. I think around episode 12 I noticed the KS vids were popping up in my subscription box and I watched 4-5. After getting an idea of what the VN was, I downloaded it and haven't looked back. I watched him finish the series (er, nix Kenji end) about a week ago, first time I had watched one in months XD

Anyway, yeah. Good stuff.

So, how about that weather?

[Leaty]

My bookmarks are a mess... It's safer this way and I won't forget.

Not everything is about you. The forums aren't just a place for you to shoot the shit. There is an expectation that you'll contribute meaningfully to a discussion. Your conduct in this thread is basically the exact opposite of that.

[Recidivism]

I saw the word Hanako and I expected something uplifting, so I decided to read it because I was in a bad mood. Why the everfucking hell didn't I stop as soon as I got to the part where he reads the note?

[Sea]

Bringing it back, because links and also holy fuck so many emotions. I feel mad and angry and sad and depressed and happy and . . . . .
Words don't quite make the stretch.
I'm not at all sure why i didn't stop reading after the whole "I cheated on you Hisao" bit because I was breaking down mentally at that point but I kept going and had my mouse on the close button but I kept going and fell into some serious depression. If this wasn't so damn well written I might be better off but you can really get your characters down, its crazy. Never though I could ever recapture that original feeling of happy and sad that i got when I ran through the Hanako route for the first time. In conclusion, I love you.
P.S. I hate you with a burning passion.

[Frankyo]

If this fic had ended with Hanako's suicide, my heart would have been crushed. Amazing fic btw.

1st post!

[Commissar Cain]

Huh.

I feel heavily like this is a situation where you still wouldn't accept the girl. I mean shit, it may be fiction and all, but Hisao needs to be a man about this sort of thing.

[hdkv]

Ten years later I bump this thread so future generations may see this.

I actually enjoyed the writing. Also, you need some Russian proverb to fully understand Hisao's actions.

Любовь зла, полюбишь и козла.

Love is evil, you may end up with a goat.

[OtakuNinja]

Love is evil, you may end up with a goat.

I love this

[Oddball]

Ten years later I bump this thread so future generations may see this.

It'll never die, will it?

[hdkv]

It'll never die, will it?

It never should. Despite controversial premise, I'm pretty pleased with delivery and writing.