That is actually why I discontinued the story in the first place, and your criticism is pretty much on point on what I noticed in the story as well. I plan to perhaps continue this story at some point in the future but it will be completely rewritten and will be focused a lot more on KS rather than the odd start I have with Fate.
Thank you for the feedback Oddball, I always appreciate it.
Fate/Shattered Wish (Discontinued, for now)
Re: Fate/Shattered Wish (Discontinued, for now)
Late to the party. But having fun in it.
Ongoing Project Falling Up and Down
Ongoing Project Falling Up and Down