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aang001
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Fan Art

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I wasn't sure where to post my art at since I'm not part of the art crew, but I thought I'd post it. I did a Fan art pic of Hanako.

Drawing:
http://www.sonozaki-mion.com/k-s/art%20 ... nart1s.jpg

Quick Line

http://www.sonozaki-mion.com/k-s/art%20 ... o_line.jpg

Quick Color:

http://www.sonozaki-mion.com/k-s/art%20 ... art_1s.jpg
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This thread will need to be moved onto the public forums, so that more people can see and participate in it.

No, I don't have that power.
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wtf?
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What have you done to Hana-chan? ;_;
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The proportions are decent. I know that you are drawing her in your style, so I'll base my comments on that fact.

You really need to give hana-chan softer features. I think the face is way too harsh for a female. And also make her hair more smooth like the other versions of hana that are floating around. Hana doesn't have spiky or rough hair.

that's about it. You should try another drawing sometime. I think you could pull off a closer Hanako while still using your style.
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Re: Fan Art

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OTP, KnM style
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Re: Fan Art

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Hell yes, needs a better drawn version though.
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Re: Fan Art

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Nice critique, needs a better written version though.
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Nice comeback, needs more cowbell.

I'd offer some constructive criticism but I know exactly nothing about art.
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I dare say the problem with it is that the opening for the neck on hanako's blouse (which is what is going down her back in this pic) is too huge, and wouldn't make sense with the blouse being worn normally.

I'm also not sure enough volume was allocated to the girls' breasts.
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Tits.

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Worksaf-awww.
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Re: Fan Art

Post by frumplstlskn »

Lawl. I said I would do this a while back. I just got bored enough to do it.

I modeled the object, if that isn't apparent. Also, it's the Fate weapons screen for those who haven't played it, but really, who hasn't played it?

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Re: Fan Art

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Oh god, I lol'd like a motherfucker. Is that some ignoble phantasm? Also, "popilar," but eh.
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