Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

[Oddball]

It's simple, cute, not too shabby. You do have a tendency to skimp on the detail, but for the most part it's no real problem.

[Dannflor]

I really like this.

I can't truthfully say that Shizune's route is among my favorites, but I do enjoy the slice of life feel you get from it. The character of Shizune herself also really intrigues me. I think you managed to capture those things perfectly in a small (lil corny) fun story. This is probably my new head canon for the end of Shizune's good route.

[Ommadawn]

I really enjoyed this as well, and having only finished KS yesterday it brought the tears in quite a few places, but made me feel good at the end. I like Shinuze's arc too, and this is a really nice epilogue to that. I'd love to read more of your work, if you're interested or inspired!