Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]

[Yukarin]

aaaa this is so cuuuuteeee

[Mohn_Jadden]

aaaa this is so cuuuuteeee

Ay. Aoi isn't 'cute'. She's super serious about space and stuff.

[Yukarin]

the last chapter made me feel very warm inside.

[Mohn_Jadden]

the last chapter made me feel very warm inside.

Well then shit, you're gonna have a miniature sun inside you if I ever end this.

[Blank Mage]

Well then shit, you're gonna have a miniature sun inside you if I ever end this.

Utsuho feels!

[Yukarin]

Well then shit, you're gonna have a miniature sun inside you if I ever end this.

Utsuho feels!

Utsuho feels are welcome, yes!

[Alpacalypse]

I read this before I made a forum account [/hipster] I am so sorry, pls don't kill me ;_;

Anyways, I've been liking this story for a while, so here was my thought process upon reading the post on the 5th of May:

So for better, or for worse, The Aoi Pseudo Route just might be getting some updates in the future

Yeah, this made me happy. Please do continue

[Mohn_Jadden]

ffs I'm really bad at this, aren't I?

Well, Bradycardia's dropped off the map again, figures, and between school ending, Watercress writing, and other obligations, I can't really get much done at the moment on this.

Plus, it'd feel weird to release an update without him. Perfectly possible, just... weird.

Sorry!

[misiek100020]

Take your time.

[RayceFarelle]

Probably my first post in the whole KS forums, or my brain can't process anything beyond a nice story 2 in the morning.

I have been reading this whole story thus far in an almost religious fashion. I have to say I am loving it. Like the other Pseudo routes, I have great interest in seeing stories involving Aoi and Keiko, especially if one of them has a pseudo route of their own.

I just want to say that, please do keep it up. Real life will always take priority and I do happen to have a whole life ahead of me to see this story completed, provided there are no unexpected events.

Consider myself as one of your die-hard fans, awaiting updates on a weekly, if not daily basis.

[Mohn_Jadden]

(Null w/ revamped update)

[Mohn_Jadden]

I apologize, the ending to this one was a bit rushed, since if I didn't do it now, I'd most likely never get it done.

I owe you guys at least an explanation of our situation. Brady is in college now and lives somewhere where the internet isn't as easy as where he lived before, and I'm a senior, taking a mishmash of classes that keep me out of the game sometime.

That said, Part One is only going to have one chapter more, and to avoid pitfalls I've had reading other routes, I believe they'll be together by the end of this part.

Thank you all for being interested, and I hope to eventually wrap this godforsaken part up.

[Alpacalypse]

Ladies and gentlemen, this is Houston, WE ARE GO FOR LAUNCH! It felt appropriate to make statement involving space-y things, 'kay?

Anyway, rushed or not, I'm okay with this myself. I've been missing Gravitation's character interactions, they're always fun to read. Although, I did notice one thing that confused me (yes, I know it's an unofficial update, but I figured I'd point it out anyway)

“Well...I…” I begin, soon dropping off as I realize that approaching the subject is something I

The sentence just abruptly ends right there, without any indication that the monologue has been interrupted. Is that sentence unfinished or was it supposed to end there?

Honestly though, I'm just happy that things seem to be sorting themselves out for you two. I've had a great deal of respect for you since I arrived on the forums and I'm happy to see that you might be getting back into this again. Good luck and I hope to see more of both you and whatever you might write in future!

[Mirage_GSM]

Oh, this one had completely dropped off my radar ^^°
Nice to see it continue. Looking at the OP you have quite a lot still planned for this.

[Mohn_Jadden]

@Alpacalypse: Thanks for pointing that out! Corrected (I think...?)

@Mirage: Overall, yeah, we do have quite a bit planned out, but I'm still making ideas to fit in between those plans.