The Fixers - "School Daze" 28-9-15

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Re: The Fixers - "Blossom" 7-9-15

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I believe in the image she has claw scars on her abdomen, presumably from when the werewolf that infected her attacked her.
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Mirage_GSM wrote:I, too, vote for some way to more clearly identify the pov character for each chapter. The way it's now you have to eliminate every possibility as they are mentioned until only one is left over...
I'll go through every chapter tonight and sort that out :)
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Decadent Albatros wrote:They who? Which scars? I'm confused D:
Skeeve wrote:I believe in the image she has claw scars on her abdomen, presumably from when the werewolf that infected her attacked her.
The students, Deca. Considering she was wearing a freshly laundered version of her other outfit, she had most of her scars on full display.
As you can see from the image, she has one on her side, one on her chest (peeking out from the shirt) and then the scar along her forearm. Two are obviously claw marks so they'd be a little weird looking to a more normal Yamaku.
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They kept look at my scars…
Kept looking?
“Can do! Same goes for all of you, just ask and I’ll do my best to get what you ask for.” She bows with a genuine smile.
For some reason I have the idea that Yuuko can't materialize clothes, so whenever someone asks she's just sewing away super fast. :lol:
not what happened to her; (Angel Lilly)
Prediction: She flew too close to the sun?

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swampie2 wrote:
They kept look at my scars…
Kept looking?
I went back and fixed the wording for that :)
swampie2 wrote:For some reason I have the idea that Yuuko can't materialize clothes, so whenever someone asks she's just sewing away super fast. :lol:
A sweatshop full of other Yuuko's in the backroom :lol:
swampie2 wrote:Prediction
Well... :roll:
swampie2 wrote:You have a knack for making adorable Hanakos sharp, keep up the good work!
I try my best, sir :oops:
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Everybody else said what I wanted to say, so I'm just going to say "ditto" to all the compliments.

Except this one thing:
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Sharp-O wrote:
swampie2 wrote:You have a knack for making adorable Hanakos sharp, keep up the good work!
I try my best, sir :oops:
WE (read: I) DEMAND MORE HANAKO ONE-SHOTS! *grabs pitchfork*

Of course, for science... Testing how people can resists the cuteness of Hanako :lol:

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Alpacalypse wrote:I found this far more amusing than I had any right to. Thanks, Sharp! :D
I hope there's more memorable lines in this one than Monomyth :D I need to outdo 'sad vagina'
Decadent Albatros wrote: WE (read: I) DEMAND MORE HANAKO ONE-SHOTS! *grabs pitchfork*

Of course, for science... Testing how people can resists the cuteness of Hanako :lol:
I'll see what I can do :wink:
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Decadent Albatros wrote:Of course, for science... Testing how people can resists the cuteness of Hanako :lol:
It'd look something like this, I think.
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swampie2 wrote:
Decadent Albatros wrote:Of course, for science... Testing how people can resists the cuteness of Hanako :lol:
It'd look something like this, I think.
your gif sources never fail to amaze me, swampie :lol:
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Decadent Albatros wrote:your gif sources never fail to amaze me, swampie :lol:
I waste a lot of time instead of doing stuff I'm meant to. :lol:

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Since we're still early on, figured I'd get the voice cast in my head out of the way while I work on the next chapter :D Molly is the only one who shares her imagined VA with Monomyth while the rest are new picks! If you've got any better suggestions, let me know!

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Molly - Lauren Landa: Xenovia - Highschool DxD
Kenji - Jason Spisak: Wally West/Kid Flash - Young Justice
Hanako Hanako - Mela Lee: Erika - Durarara!!
Shin - David Vincent: Senketsu - Kill La Kill
Lilly - Kari Wahlgreen: Celty - Durarara!!
Shiina - Stephanie Lemelin: Artemis - Young Justice
Yuuko - Vanessa Marshal - Hera - Star Wars Rebels
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Sharp-O wrote:Since we're still early on, figured I'd get the voice cast in my head out of the way while I work on the next chapter :D Molly is the only one who shares her imagined VA with Monomyth while the rest are new picks! If you've got any better suggestions, let me know!

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Molly - Lauren Landa: Xenovia - Highschool DxD
Kenji - Jason Spisak: Wally West/Kid Flash - Young Justice
Hanako Hanako - Mela Lee: Erika - Durarara!!
Shin - David Vincent: Senketsu - Kill La Kill
Lilly - Kari Wahlgreen: Celty - Durarara!!
Shiina - Stephanie Lemelin: Artemis - Young Justice
Yuuko - Vanessa Marshal - Hera - Star Wars Rebels
seen several animes but none of those ones :P
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Re: The Fixers - "Blossom" 7-9-15

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Considering just how bubbly she is, I can't hear this Hanako as anyone but Yurika Misumaru's dub voice. Not just Jennifer K. Earhart, but specifically Jennifer K. Earhart doing Yurika doing Hanako.
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Of those I've only seen Durarara and there not the English Dub, and from the Japanese Dub I can't even remember what Erika's voice sonds like. (Personality-wise I think she's about as far from Hanako as Lilly is from Celty...)

I have to say, though that Miyuki Sawashiro does the best dub for a mute character EVER! (not that there's much competition)

Hmm... I haven't seen any of the other anime she voiced... I may have to remedy that shortly. Arakawa is an interesting option.
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