Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)

Steinherz · Post by **Steinherz** » Sat Jul 04, 2015 11:40 am

Eurobeatjester wrote:New commission being worked on for a faraway chapter, so when it gets done I'll post it before I write it. I think you all will like it, if it comes out the way I'm hoping

Wonder what it's going to be, and who by.

Eurobeatjester wrote:Also, hitting a bit of a writing block with the next chapter. I'm trying to strike a balance between Linkin Park way-too-melodramatic and Mary Sue, and after a few rewrites I'm not quite there yet.

Isn't that the same thing?

Eurobeatjester · Post by **Eurobeatjester** » Sat Jul 04, 2015 1:49 pm

Steinherz wrote:
Eurobeatjester wrote:New commission being worked on for a faraway chapter, so when it gets done I'll post it before I write it. I think you all will like it, if it comes out the way I'm hoping
Wonder what it's going to be, and who by.

Eurobeatjester wrote:Also, hitting a bit of a writing block with the next chapter. I'm trying to strike a balance between Linkin Park way-too-melodramatic and Mary Sue, and after a few rewrites I'm not quite there yet.
Isn't that the same thing?

Trying to strike the balance between "Oh god, I/she is going to die young, poor poor Saki..." and "Meh, it's just a disease that will kill me in a horrible way. No biggie. I'm hungry. Who wants Chinese?"

brythain · Post by **brythain** » Sat Jul 04, 2015 8:48 pm

Eurobeatjester wrote:Trying to strike the balance between "Oh god, I/she is going to die young, poor poor Saki..." and "Meh, it's just a disease that will kill me in a horrible way. No biggie. I'm hungry. Who wants Chinese?"

All you need is Hisao doing #1 and Saki doing #2.

TheNexus97 · Post by **TheNexus97** » Sun Jul 05, 2015 10:14 am

brythain wrote:
Eurobeatjester wrote:Trying to strike the balance between "Oh god, I/she is going to die young, poor poor Saki..." and "Meh, it's just a disease that will kill me in a horrible way. No biggie. I'm hungry. Who wants Chinese?"
All you need is Hisao doing #1 and Saki doing #2.

Touché xD

EMMSixteenA4 · Post by **EMMSixteenA4** » Sun Jul 05, 2015 4:02 pm

brythain wrote:All you need is Hisao doing #1 and Saki doing #2.

He's dead right

Eurobeatjester · Post by **Eurobeatjester** » Wed Jul 08, 2015 7:25 pm

Good news! Rtil's letting me commission him for a pivotal moment in the next chapter

Bad news! It's going to take quite a while before the art is done. So I won't delay the chapter for it, which is about halfway done!

Sharp-O · Post by **Sharp-O** » Wed Jul 08, 2015 7:32 pm

Custom art? Shiny!

Looking forward to the next part, Euro

Parzival · Post by **Parzival** » Thu Jul 09, 2015 11:14 am

You got a rtil commission? Oh that is ultra cool.

brythain wrote:All you need is Hisao doing #1 and Saki doing #2.

You would be surprised how hard a condition like this can hit someone, even after a long time. She may not say so to Hisao, or anyone, but it eats you up on the inside. If you've ever know someone with cancer or some other disease with a high chance of death, you might have noticed this.

Solistor · Post by **Solistor** » Wed Jul 15, 2015 2:15 am

Been away for a while but I'm glad to see this trucking. Personally my favorite currently-updating route.

Eurobeatjester · Post by **Eurobeatjester** » Sun Jul 26, 2015 3:50 pm

New chapter should be done this week

With the freeway collapse in California preventing goods from making it to where I work in a timely manner, everyone last week was pulling double shifts, myself included. I've probably slept for close to 40 hours this weekend, haha

Sharp-O · Post by **Sharp-O** » Sun Jul 26, 2015 4:26 pm

As long as you're alright, Euro

timetravelzero · Post by **timetravelzero** » Mon Jul 27, 2015 9:35 pm

Good to hear you're alright, EBJ. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

rimvydasm · Post by **rimvydasm** » Fri Jul 31, 2015 2:12 pm

just found this short fanfic about Saki,it's pretty sad,but it was good and i really like the ending.it's pretty old,so you probably already read it. http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6075
it's years after graduation,and Saki is dead...

Eurobeatjester · Post by **Eurobeatjester** » Fri Jul 31, 2015 9:49 pm

I haven't read that one actually, for the same reason I haven't read Themocaw's route

I have a pretty good idea what I want to do with the story, but I know that my biggest weakness as a writer is absorbing ideas through osmosis.

brythain · Post by **brythain** » Fri Jul 31, 2015 10:09 pm

Eurobeatjester wrote:I haven't read that one actually, for the same reason I haven't read Themocaw's route

I have a pretty good idea what I want to do with the story, but I know that my biggest weakness as a writer is absorbing ideas through osmosis.

You should read that one. It won't affect yours much. I hope.

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