Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
Very engaging story so far! I think I love Saki's personality the most out of the other girls, or at least would be able to get along with her the best in real life.
Will you also be doing different endings for her based on different choices? Or will it just be one path?
Will you also be doing different endings for her based on different choices? Or will it just be one path?
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
I've always imagined Saki's good ending quite similar to Clannad After Story, when Nagisa dies and Tomoya is utterly distraught about it.
I played the same scene in my mind but with Saki and Hisao instead.
The feelz, man...
I played the same scene in my mind but with Saki and Hisao instead.
The feelz, man...
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
No... you stop that. You go right back to Hell, you. Why would you give me that current-head-canon?!TheNexus97 wrote:I played the same scene but with Saki and Hisao instead.
Akira>Lilly=Shizune>Emi>Hanako>Mutou=Nurse>Saki>Misha=Rika>Yuuko>Meiko=Miki>Suzu>Kenji>Rin=Iwanako>Jigoro>Nomiya>{POWERGAP}>Hisao Eh, my opinion anyway
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
Because it's going to happen either way. Sorry to say it, but for any relationship with Saki, it's basically the best-case scenario (unless the other person dies at exactly the same time for some inexplicable reason).timetravelzero wrote:No... you stop that. You go right back to Hell, you. Why would you give me that current-head-canon?!TheNexus97 wrote:I played the same scene but with Saki and Hisao instead.
Either way, somebody's going to have to live on without the other. Sad truth
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
i hope you're wrong about this,but i know it make sense,thats just how Saki is.i remember from another VN,where in the happy ending,one person dies after 5 years being together,it's sad he died,but it's still a happy ending,after all other person talk about this with her grandchild,and it in the end it's happy ending.i like this ending very much.
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
I don't intend to write branching paths.
As for the ending? It's about the journey, not the destination...
As for the ending? It's about the journey, not the destination...
Stuff I'm currently writing: Learning To Fly: A Saki Enomoto Pseudo Route
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
Totally understandable. You have a monumental task ahead of you after all. I'm excited to see where the story goes even though it will probably tear my heart out and smash it to pieces.
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
That's what KS is about: the feels.
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well
Stuff I'm currently writing: Learning To Fly: A Saki Enomoto Pseudo Route
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
Well, you're stuck with me, if that helps any.Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
I'm enjoying it so far, Saki is a very interesting character.Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well
Still looking forward to the next part!
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
Do keep going, I'm looking forward to the ride as well as the destination!Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well
Even if the author is silenced, the performance is stopped, the story will not end.
Whether it's a comedy or a tragedy, if there is cheering, the story will continue on.
Just like the many lives.
For the us who are still in it and still in the journey, send warm blessings.
---We will continue to walk down this path until eternity.
Whether it's a comedy or a tragedy, if there is cheering, the story will continue on.
Just like the many lives.
For the us who are still in it and still in the journey, send warm blessings.
---We will continue to walk down this path until eternity.
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
Lurker Blank Mage reads all the stories.Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well
And we're back.
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
You've started posting too much, can't rightfully call yourself a lurker anymore.Blank Mage wrote:Lurker Blank Mage reads all the stories.Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)
New commission being worked on for a faraway chapter, so when it gets done I'll post it before I write it. I think you all will like it, if it comes out the way I'm hoping
Also, hitting a bit of a writing block with the next chapter. I'm trying to strike a balance between Linkin Park way-too-melodramatic and Mary Sue, and after a few rewrites I'm not quite there yet.
Also, hitting a bit of a writing block with the next chapter. I'm trying to strike a balance between Linkin Park way-too-melodramatic and Mary Sue, and after a few rewrites I'm not quite there yet.
Stuff I'm currently writing: Learning To Fly: A Saki Enomoto Pseudo Route
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
Blank Mage wrote:believe in yourselfEurobeatjester wrote:I doubt my ability to write convincing lesbian erotica