Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)

[EMMSixteenA4]

I don't know forum etiquette, being new, so please let me know if I'm doing something wrong, I wouldn't like to harm this thread by being stupid and newbie.

Welcome to the madhouse, buddy. It's great, padded walls and everything.

Thanks

Welcome to the forums! Can I just say that your avatar makes me really happy?
Because it does. Bionicle FTW!

Thanks also! I should actually say, I had it made for me (single eye and whatnot) by 0nuku on Flickr, who does some wonderful stuff with Bionicle if that would take your fancy. It got rebooted this year, you know.

I'll shut up now rather than going off-topic which would obviously be a bad start

My goal is to have it finished next week. Conventions are insane!

YESSSS HYPE!
Still, like I said, take your time by all means.

[Blank Mage]

I don't know forum etiquette, being new, so please let me know if I'm doing something wrong, I wouldn't like to harm this thread by being stupid and newbie.

it's pretty simple, really. Don't ask people to write stuff, don't be a jerk, and at least make sure that whatever you're saying has something to do with something someone else said. At some point, you'll probably get a warning from Silentcook, but don't worry, it's like a rite of passage.

[HoneyBakedHam]

He's right, you know. Had a couple instances where I got a lecture from Silent about something (one of them I wasn't sure how what I said was interpreted as a rule-breaker, but meh).

[Eurobeatjester]

All this hype talk makes me worry I won't be able to live up to it

Ya'll are fine with a super serious chapter or two, right?

[HoneyBakedHam]

Yo, don't tell me you're gonna whack off one of the characters, are you?!

I'm still recovering from George R.R. Martin...

[xthorgoldx]

Euro, I'm pretty sure we'd be happy with anything. Saki is Saki, srs or no.

[FelOnyx]

I don't think anyone reading this don't expect it to get super serious at some point. It's been pretty lighthearted so far, so I've been really curious as to what will happen when the whole "yeah, both the main characters are probably going to die young" thing and other serious business stuff catches up with the story.

[kaserkin]

Yo, don't tell me you're gonna whack off one of the characters, are you?!

I'm still recovering from George R.R. Martin...

A girl with pink hair and drills stepped up to Hisao. She thrust a longsword through her boyfriend's heart, and slowly twisted it.

"Takashi Maeda sends his regards~."

[HoneyBakedHam]

Yo, don't tell me you're gonna whack off one of the characters, are you?!

I'm still recovering from George R.R. Martin...

A girl with pink hair and drills stepped up to Hisao. She thrust a longsword through her boyfriend's heart, and slowly twisted it.

"Takashi Maeda sends his regards~."

Jokes on you: You have no idea how bad I've wanted to do that to him.

[Craftyatom]

Yo, don't tell me you're gonna whack off one of the characters, are you?!

They're not even dating yet, somehow anyone getting "whacked off" seems like it would be hurried business

At some point, you'll probably get a warning from Silentcook, but don't worry, it's like a rite of passage.

I can't tell if I'm lucky, well-behaved, or still technically new to the forum.

Ya'll are fine with a super serious chapter or two, right?

Aww, I hate serious chapters - it generally means that romance is either nonexistent or half-hearted. I mean, I wasn't expecting everything to be peachy keen after last time, but I thought, y'know, maybe it'll be a nice bonding experience? We can laugh about it later? Keeping each other company in the hospital? No?

Being an optimist sucks sometimes. It probably gets better, though.

[kaserkin]

Yo, don't tell me you're gonna whack off one of the characters, are you?!

I'm still recovering from George R.R. Martin...

A girl with pink hair and drills stepped up to Hisao. She thrust a longsword through her boyfriend's heart, and slowly twisted it.

"Takashi Maeda sends his regards~."

Jokes on you: You have no idea how bad I've wanted to do that to him.

You're talking about Hisao, right? How can anyone dislike the KINGINDANORF?

I'm not a huge fan of him either

[HoneyBakedHam]

He's the reason why I wanna make a fanfic with an OC that replaces him.

[Parzival]

Ya'll are fine with a super serious chapter or two, right?

I was wondering when the super depressing stuff about mortality was coming. Hype!

[zanntaggerung]

This is the first fanfic that I've read and I'm glad I stumbled upon it (while lurking on the forums with no account...). Even though it's akin to reading a regular book again, it seems like a whole new experience after reading the VN, where the imagery is always shown, but now I can form my own imagery.

Insane ramblings aside, keep it up! It's been said before, but I like how you're building up each of the characters instead of just focusing on Saki (I wouldn't complain even if you did-she's awesome). It helps add to your little mark of ownership instead of just spinning off what the original writers built.

[timetravelzero]

All this hype talk makes me worry I won't be able to live up to it

Ya'll are fine with a super serious chapter or two, right?

Yay, serious time! That's what hooked me on the original KS project, so of course I'm game for some hard reality to set in here.
Looking forward to it as always, EBJ.