Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Because I get the impression that Iwanako might be able to bond well with the long-suffering sidekick of a genki girl.Leaty wrote:Huuuhhhhh... Perhaps I'm missing a really simple joke, but why Keiko, specifically, other than a shared penchant for playing with hair and the fact that she has one of the best character designs in the whole game?dewelar wrote:Yeah, you know, if I had to pick a horse in this race, it'd be this one right now, too -- although Iwanako/Keiko would be the stalking horse .
Rin is orthogonal to everything.
Stuff I've written: Developments, a continuation of Lilly's (bad? neutral?) ending - COMPLETE!
Stuff I've written: Developments, a continuation of Lilly's (bad? neutral?) ending - COMPLETE!
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Heh. Yeah, personally, I prefer IX, but VIII did have a lot of cool stuff in it.Leaty wrote:If I were to write an April Fool's scene, it'd be a prologue where a completely non-disabled Emi and Iwanako were dueling with gunblades in the middle of a storm, and then Emi blasted Iwanako right in the chest with a Meltdown spell, and as Iwanako collapsed she Gunblade+R1'd Emi's legs off, then woke up in the Infirmary and was escorted back to the dorms by Instructor Satou. (I guess that would make Momomi Rinoa, because dogs. Hisao is Ellone.)
...And now I'm actually kind of wondering just how one would go about writing that recursive fusion fic. Making the person with the heart condition a crack international mercenary is unfortunately a bit of a stretch. I mean, just going to fight Ifrit in the beginning would probably be too much exertion, and I don't know how she'd manage to escape from the spider robot thing in Dollet. Emi might make a good Selphie, though...
But of course, the biggest problem is that it would be Iwanako/Momomi shipping instead of Iwanako/Hanako. :)
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Hah, yes!
Though that begs the question of who Seifer (might be getting the spelling wrong; it's been a while) would be.
Though that begs the question of who Seifer (might be getting the spelling wrong; it's been a while) would be.
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
I've read the first trilogy (3 in 1 edition). It was okay. I enjoyed it for the most part, noted some points that were not done so well and when I read the summaries for the sequels I decided that talking dolphins were not for me...Well, yeah. Dragonflight isn't an especially good book. (I only read it in the first place so that I could RP in a Weyr with a friend, and almost immediately afterward, that RP collapsed because lady drama.)
What? No, I'd never think you would do that. Though I think the festival (as some seemed to suggest) would be a bit early for any believable reconciliation.I certainly hope there aren't still readers who think that she's been written out of the plot. Write her out??? And miss out on all that drama?
Don't forget the Japanese version of KS that also came out yesterday. Seems a lot of people tried to feed us false April Fool's jokes this year.So weird, right? April's Bounty, apparently. Neither I nor Forgetful were aware of the other, so given our update speeds that's gotta be a statistical near-impossibility.
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune
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My collected KS-Fan Fictions: Mirage's Myths
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
One word: Lovely.
Now it's time to pass out.
Now it's time to pass out.
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Sisterhood by Guest Poster
Learning to Fly by Eurobeatjester
A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route by Scissorlips
Developments by dewelar
Hisao and Kenji: Master Detectives by Hoitash
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
HNNG... HNNG... HNNG...Leaty wrote:I love Katawa Shoujo, but Hisao lives in a Hisao-shaped hole.
I apologize.
Another update well worth the wait. This is the first chapter in which Iwanako's way made me pause; the little 'Nako in my head had to take a breath. I love how it seems to work as a kind of stress-o-meter, how it vanishes when she's occupied by some minor task (like looking over books) but returns with vengeance when some incongruity appears.
A fellow reader made tribute to Iwanako on our Minecraft server upon learning of the new update. You've made some silly fans, Leaty.
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Sorry, I was referring to the use of italics.Leaty wrote:I'll admit I'm having a bit of trouble parsing what you're saying here, but I'm getting the gist of it, and I'm glad I'm able to have that effect on you as a reader. Thank you so much for the praise.strange desire wrote:This is the first chapter in which Iwanako's way made me pause; the little 'Nako in my head had to take a breath. I love how it seems to work as a kind of stress-o-meter, how it vanishes when she's occupied by some minor task (like looking over books) but returns with vengeance when some incongruity appears.
You've just made someone very happy. I present thee...Leaty wrote:Do you think you could screenshot that Minecraft thing for me?
Iwanako, the infant zombie pig man riding a chicken. (Click to embiggen.)
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
It looks pretty cool, but it might be distracting. Thinking about it, I would probably prefer it without the flashing thumps.
Best girl
Hanako=Shizune>Misha>Lilly>Rin>Emi
Best route
Hanako>Lilly>Rin>Emi>Shizune
Hanako=Shizune>Misha>Lilly>Rin>Emi
Best route
Hanako>Lilly>Rin>Emi>Shizune
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Hm. It seems to me like an improvement but not an especially big one; I wouldn't object to it, but the current text version is also fine.
Neat effect, though.
Neat effect, though.
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