Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)

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I love how it turned out!
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Aye, it's a cute picture for a cute story. :)
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Well, I've been following this story for a while now, figure it's time to chip in my two cents since I got this shiny new forum account.

Short version: ERMAGHERD, Saki route with likeable Saki, best thing ever!!!!! :D

Ahem.

Long version: As much as I thought that Themocaw's Saki route was an interesting read (Saki was kinda justified in being angry at the world IMO, even if it made her into an unlikeable bitch) , this route just made me smile. I love how your portrayal of Saki and Hisao was so earnest, and Saki's teasing in the pool scene felt just right (laughed quite a lot, there). The foreshadowing and subtle hints going on are just right too and I cannot wait for the next update as a result.
The artwork that has been posted here has been pretty cool, too

Keep up the good work, EBJ :wink:
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Don't think the new artwork will be done by the time I finish the next chapter, so I'll post the art when it's finished. I saw the preview picture and it looks amazing!

Just because I can't update regularly doesn't mean I can't commission others ;)
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I created an account just so I could bookmark this story! It really is that good. I'm only recently getting into reading KS fanworks, and I haven't been disappointing at all by what I've seen so far - this included. The hardware failure must have hit you pretty hard as a writer, so I hope it doesn't deter you from continuing this story!

As a side note, this is one of the very few fanfictions I've read that have inspired me to do art for it! As an inconsequential high schooler with dreams of majoring in illustration from a sort of decent college, I hope that I can contribute some small token of my appreciation for your efforts soon! Saki and Hisao have an awesome chemistry, and so do some of the other secondary characters that you've managed to flesh out just as much as you have the main heroine. It really makes me want to flesh them out myself using my tablet pen!
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New artwork just got completed! Putting the finishing touches on the rest of the chapter. I promise to have it done tomorrow or Sunday :D
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Eurobeatjester wrote:New artwork just got completed! Putting the finishing touches on the rest of the chapter. I promise to have it done tomorrow or Sunday :D
ENGAGING HYPE THRUSTERS!!!
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azumeow wrote:ENGAGING HYPE THRUSTERS!!!
Captain, strap in, we're going into MAXIMUM OVERHYPE!
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Solistor wrote:
azumeow wrote:ENGAGING HYPE THRUSTERS!!!
Captain, strap in, we're going into MAXIMUM OVERHYPE!
I second that motion. Full speed ahead, cap'n!
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Alpacalypse wrote:
Solistor wrote:
azumeow wrote:ENGAGING HYPE THRUSTERS!!!
Captain, strap in, we're going into MAXIMUM OVERHYPE!
I second that motion. Full speed ahead, cap'n!
She cannae take it capn!
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Asriel wrote: She cannae take it capn!
Nonsense, engineer. This ship is tougher than anyone gives her credit for. Prepare the ship for hype speed!
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Dammit man, I'm a doctor, not an engineer!
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'kay guys, let's stay on topic, or else silentcook'll come here and you don't want that.

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Considering I finally managed to get caught up with this, I'm excited for the next update.

When it comes out, assuming I have time, I'll do a multi-chapter commentary like I generally do for Developments when I find myself sitting on a few hours.
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