Trading Secrets

OremLK · Post by **OremLK** » Fri Jan 09, 2015 11:43 am

More art for fun and practice

BMFJack · Post by **BMFJack** » Fri Jan 09, 2015 1:22 pm

It's pretty good, but honestly I'm just curious about the title. Why "trading secrets"?

OremLK · Post by **OremLK** » Fri Jan 09, 2015 1:46 pm

I decided to have her blushing and looking a bit shocked. I'll leave what secret she's just been told up to interpretation!

Valjean Lafitte · Post by **Valjean Lafitte** » Fri Jan 09, 2015 5:32 pm

I like it! Her hands and feet need a little work, but it's better than anything I could do.

OremLK · Post by **OremLK** » Fri Jan 09, 2015 5:47 pm

Yeah, I'm terrible at hands. They're so damn hard to draw. Just spent an hour drawing my hand repeatedly from different angles. Hopefully with more of that kind of thing I'll get better in the future.

Munchenhausen · Post by **Munchenhausen** » Fri Jan 09, 2015 6:15 pm

Fantastic work, mate!
An impressive amount of work has gone into this, I can tell! A damn sight more effort than goes into any of mine, at least

I love the colouring and shading, it's fantastic. Maybe work a tad on perspectives, since her arms and legs seem at a strange angle, but that'll surely come with practise.

Keep it up, lad

I'd love to see more!

Byakku · Post by **Byakku** » Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:24 pm

Her eyes seem a bit too close together, perhaps her left eye should be a tad more to the left? Great drawing nonetheless!

OremLK · Post by **OremLK** » Sat Jan 10, 2015 5:56 am

Thanks guys! I've still got a lot I need to improve on by practicing perspective and anatomy etc, but it's fun to occasionally draw a KS character in the meantime.

BMFJack · Post by **BMFJack** » Sat Jan 10, 2015 9:41 am

It doesn't have to be amazing to be good anyway, I can't even draw stick figures

Sure the anatomy looks a little wonky, but it doesn't really detract from the piece as a whole. And like you said, you're practicing.

Rock on, man!

brythain · Post by **brythain** » Sat Jan 10, 2015 10:16 am

BMFJack wrote:It doesn't have to be amazing to be good anyway, I can't even draw stick figures

Sure the anatomy looks a little wonky, but it doesn't really detract from the piece as a whole. And like you said, you're practicing.

Rock on, man!

The anatomy's believable, I think the skirt is a little odd in the way the material falls. But it's a great practice piece, miles ahead of anything I can draw, for sure!

OremLK · Post by **OremLK** » Tue Jan 13, 2015 9:08 am

Appreciate the kind words and the critique. I've got a lot more studying to do, that's for sure. I'll draw another of the girls soon though!

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