Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}
Best wishes that your surgery goes well. And now you're making me feel bad for my chapter being up first...Leaty wrote:Well, I'm getting a kinda serious surgery done on Monday, so I'm really hoping I can at least get the stories to my betas before that happens. Otherwise, it'll be about two weeks at the earliest before I can publish the story, which would suck, because I'm almost done (I just have to write the last scene I had planned out, and we're golden.)
Yep, that definitely qualifies for mammoth-ness. Makes my new high of 8,300 look paltry.It's also looking like this is going to be the most mammoth update ever, since we're up to 11,000 words and I'm not even on the last scene. It could ultimately wind up being something like 18,000, but I don't think much more than that.
And the anticipation grows...
Rin is orthogonal to everything.
Stuff I've written: Developments, a continuation of Lilly's (bad? neutral?) ending - COMPLETE!
Stuff I've written: Developments, a continuation of Lilly's (bad? neutral?) ending - COMPLETE!
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Right...ISTR you mentioning that before. Any particular reason you're releasing them all at once, or is it just that they're all going to be ready at the same time? I'm thinking the latter.Leaty wrote:Keep in mind this is a large update, not a large chapter. There's, I think, five new scenes in total here (bringing the total number of published scenes up to seventeen, since Testing the Waters is inappropriately in chapter format instead of scene format,) and at least one of them is more of an epilogue to Safe Reboot than its own scene, at a meager 900 words.dewelar wrote:Yep, that definitely qualifies for mammoth-ness. Makes my new high of 8,300 look paltry.
This is something I could never do: making significant changes mid-story. If and when I do that for Developments, it'll be after the whole thing is done.Cardioblivion is still the longest chapter, at 8,212 words, and I don't know if that will change before the end of Act One.
Don't start me thinking like bhtooefr, now...*shivers*Also, I'm not really expecting anything with the surgery to go wrong, but in the event of my death, somebody else can finish the story, I guess.
Rin is orthogonal to everything.
Stuff I've written: Developments, a continuation of Lilly's (bad? neutral?) ending - COMPLETE!
Stuff I've written: Developments, a continuation of Lilly's (bad? neutral?) ending - COMPLETE!
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}
I know you said everything should go fine with the surgery, but good luck anyways.
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}
All the best, and I doubt just anybody else can do it justice. So I'm rooting for 'you won't be finished but the story will'.Leaty wrote:Also, I'm not really expecting anything with the surgery to go wrong, but in the event of my death, somebody else can finish the story, I guess.
Post-Yamaku, what happens? After The Dream is a mosaic that follows everyone to the (sometimes) bitter end.
Main Index (Complete)—Shizune/Lilly/Emi/Hanako/Rin/Misha + Miki + Natsume
Secondary Arcs: Rika/Mutou/Akira • Hideaki | Others (WIP): Straw—A Dream of Suzu • Sakura—The Kenji Saga.
"Much has been lost, and there is much left to lose." — Tim Powers, The Drawing of the Dark (1979)
Main Index (Complete)—Shizune/Lilly/Emi/Hanako/Rin/Misha + Miki + Natsume
Secondary Arcs: Rika/Mutou/Akira • Hideaki | Others (WIP): Straw—A Dream of Suzu • Sakura—The Kenji Saga.
"Much has been lost, and there is much left to lose." — Tim Powers, The Drawing of the Dark (1979)
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}
Good luck with your surgery and recovery.
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Man, you are really doing your research on this chapter.Leaty wrote:Well, I'm getting a kinda serious surgery done on Monday....
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}
Well, if you die, let us know.Leaty wrote:Also, I'm not really expecting anything with the surgery to go wrong, but in the event of my death, somebody else can finish the story, I guess.
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}
But they gave you the good meds, right?Leaty wrote:Good news: I made it through my surgery
Bad news: uuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhh
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}
Seeing that you had surgery I guess you were nil by mouth, so at least your can eat, drink and be merry again! Just don't rush your recovery for our sakes. Good things come to those that wait and by the sound of things, its gonna be great!
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Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2014-2-23}
Argh! Keyboard malfunction! Happy for the good news, though!Leaty wrote:Good news: I made it through my surgery
Bad news: uuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhh
Post-Yamaku, what happens? After The Dream is a mosaic that follows everyone to the (sometimes) bitter end.
Main Index (Complete)—Shizune/Lilly/Emi/Hanako/Rin/Misha + Miki + Natsume
Secondary Arcs: Rika/Mutou/Akira • Hideaki | Others (WIP): Straw—A Dream of Suzu • Sakura—The Kenji Saga.
"Much has been lost, and there is much left to lose." — Tim Powers, The Drawing of the Dark (1979)
Main Index (Complete)—Shizune/Lilly/Emi/Hanako/Rin/Misha + Miki + Natsume
Secondary Arcs: Rika/Mutou/Akira • Hideaki | Others (WIP): Straw—A Dream of Suzu • Sakura—The Kenji Saga.
"Much has been lost, and there is much left to lose." — Tim Powers, The Drawing of the Dark (1979)