Thank you, I have fixed the problems you listed and went through it a few times, fixing everything I spotted. I appreciate the support, I'm not the best at proof-reading, but I hope I can improve through help like this.Mirage_GSM wrote:Lists errors and grammar problems, spellings etc.
Katawa Shoujo:Yuto's Tale OC Fan Fic
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Re: Katawa Shoujo:Yuto's Tale OC Fan Fic
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Re: Katawa Shoujo:Yuto's Tale OC Fan Fic
Sadly, I will not be continuing Yuto's tale. I have choose to write a new story, after not being able to find a good story line for this particular story. I have started writing another story, in which Yuto is a secondary character instead of the Protagonist. If you want to check out my new story, here it is; http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t ... fe#p206783