That's kinda what i was aiming for.I was expecting something totally different.
Miki's First Time
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TheGoatman
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I always do this to see if there's anything more to the story(part 2, etc) and my expectations were pulled in a direction very different from what I got. Still pleased nonetheless, good miki fics are always nice(scratch that, good fics are always nice periodthat was a terrible pun)NotSoClassy wrote:I Imagine what would someone think after skipping the whole thing and reading just the two last lines.
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Needless commentary here, but I have the impression that if Miki is that opposed to having her stump touched by someone she wants to get intimate with, then she probably shouldn't be trying to go that far to begin with. If that makes any sense.
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I always welcome "needless" commentary on my stuff. It always interests me to see how people interpret what I've written. Although in this case, I don't disagree with you completely.Mahorfeus wrote:Needless commentary here, but I have the impression that if Miki is that opposed to having her stump touched by someone she wants to get intimate with, then she probably shouldn't be trying to go that far to begin with. If that makes any sense.
Of course, nobody ever said the decisions the characters have made always make sense either.
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Mader Levap
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Loved it. It is so rare to see something like that written realistically. Especially that in end nothing actually happened, except slightly more damaged Hisao. Poor guy...
Would like to see continuation. That would be hilarious. How many tries it would take? And obvious "What, already?" line.
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Would like to see continuation. That would be hilarious. How many tries it would take? And obvious "What, already?" line.
BTW:
It was supposed to be "She wanted to...", right?Oddball wrote:instead it came out as “Shit! Shit! Fuck! Shit!” he wanted to run into the hall calling for help
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having actually done the exact thing, I was rather perturbed, but I went back through just for the hell of it and the good reviews and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Perhaps people should stop trying to confront the curse head on and make one shots such as this.Helbereth wrote:They would probably assume this fic was not so classy.NotSoClassy wrote:I Imagine what would someone think after skipping the whole thing and reading just the two last lines.
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Quite please with the authentic scene, quite please indeed. 
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WhatEnglish_Gentleman wrote:Quite please with the authentic scene, quite please indeed.
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English Gentleman's first language isn't English?Comrade wrote:WhatEnglish_Gentleman wrote:Quite please with the authentic scene, quite please indeed.
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Ha, awesome. Felt natural, and it was sweet too.
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Ahaha that was great Giggled at the leather peeing clowns part. Mate, there's nothing better than a bit of banter between a couple.
Great work, man!
Giggled at the leather peeing clowns part. Mate, there's nothing better than a bit of banter between a couple.Great work, man!
Like stupid, silly doodles with no point? You've come to the right place, friend :^)
I also occasionally write oneshots. Why not have a skimread?
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I also occasionally write oneshots. Why not have a skimread?
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Wasn't sure what to expect at first, but as a kept reading, the more I liked it.
I've read/heard of the Miki curse, and one shots might be the place to start...Sea wrote:.... Perhaps people should stop trying to confront the curse head on and make one shots such as this.
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poopooface
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I did that exact thing and just shrugged.NotSoClassy wrote:I Imagine what would someone think after skipping the whole thing and reading just the two last lines.
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Amusing, but awkward as hell. Seems just right.
Rin > Shizune > Emi > Hanako > Lilly