Well, thank you for your readership.bnash22 wrote:Made an account for pretty much the sole purpose of telling you how much I love this.
Also, props on sticking to this story for almost 2 years. That's dedication if i've ever seen it.
Keep up the good work, I read up to here in about a weeks time so I'm a little too excited for the continuation
Since I'm doing so, I might as well point out that I've gone and restructured a few of the latter chapters. The title page lists an edit today where I split chapter 38 "Departure" into two chapters. Literally nothing changed in the writing, or even the point at which the chapter had been divided, but the first part of that chapter has been given its own chapter title "A Cure For Insomnia", which resulted in my having to change the chapter numbers for all the following chapters. Thus the most recent chapter - Sojourn - is now chapter 45 instead of 44, and all the chapters in the final act have been adjusted accordingly.
It occurs to me now that listing the chapters by act - which is how I have them numbered in my files - might have been a better idea, but I'd have to go back through and alter the numbers on 40 chapters... and that just sounds like work.
Anyway, carry on.
EDIT: Also, I just went and pulled the trigger on restructuring the acts here on the forum. That means there are 4 instead of 5 acts, and the first two have been combined into one, thus they are now Resonance, Dissonance, Melody and Cadence. Each act also has a brief, two paragraph foreword which is attached to its first chapter.