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Pedagogy
Re: Pedagogy
Nicely done...
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...I need to find that mind bleach now...
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Munchenhausen
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Re: Pedagogy
I was thoroughly enjoying this story from Mutou's PoV. The way you occasionally drifted off on a tangent absolutely stank of Mutou and I loved it. He definitely seems to have some form of ADD.
The ending though. I don't know why, but it was the nipple clamps that got me.
Fucking lol'd
10/10
The ending though. I don't know why, but it was the nipple clamps that got me.
Fucking lol'd
10/10
Like stupid, silly doodles with no point? You've come to the right place, friend :^)
I also occasionally write oneshots. Why not have a skimread?
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I also occasionally write oneshots. Why not have a skimread?
Miki fic? Miki fic!
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"We are a small country full of the most stubborn bastards on the planet. You might want to rethink your actions." - Anon
Re: Pedagogy
Okay normally I'm not a huge fan of necro, but this was worth the reshuffling... It's all so very normal until the last 300 words or so... I didn't know Aura had ever taken such a hard left turn in a narrative - bravo!
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Mournful3ch0
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Between shoving Mutou's junk in my face and keeping TD chapters in delay (don't think I don't know you finished the story in September) I'm almost 1/4 the way to considering removing the Aiko pic from my sig. Why.Helbereth wrote:Okay normally I'm not a huge fan of necro, but this was worth the reshuffling... It's all so very normal until the last 300 words or so...
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FeroxAnima
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LOL xDD
I just about died in those last few lines; as far from anything I'd have expected as it gets
I just about died in those last few lines; as far from anything I'd have expected as it gets
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That one day was a good one.
Re: Pedagogy
Nice.Aura wrote:Pedagogy
Throw Nomiya into the mix and that is when science meets art.
I wonder if Mutou can find the "Next Big Thing" that he's so interested.
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Mader Levap
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Re: Pedagogy
No. Just no.
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Jailbreaker
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What has science done?
(Hisao's face. Hisao's face is what science has done.)
(Hisao's face. Hisao's face is what science has done.)
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LordMarluxia
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Re: Pedagogy
..whaaaat ttheeeeEEE FUUUCCKKK ??
It seemed serious. It seemed real.
Like a good short side story.
And then, like a slap in the face reality comes crashing down in the form of the last few sentences.
Miss Aura, I am dissapoint.
It was still funny, in its own creepy way.
It seemed serious. It seemed real.
Like a good short side story.
And then, like a slap in the face reality comes crashing down in the form of the last few sentences.
Miss Aura, I am dissapoint.
It was still funny, in its own creepy way.
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Cat: "Where are you going?" Alice: "Which way should I go?"
Cat: "That depends on where you are going." Alice: "I don’t know."
Cat: "Then it doesn’t matter which way you go."
Re: Pedagogy
I mean... okay. Yeah, definitely.
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Eurobeatjester
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"Oh cool, Aura wrote something. Lemme check it out...hmm, this is really well written and JESUS CHRIST"
Stuff I'm currently writing: Learning To Fly: A Saki Enomoto Pseudo Route
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
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edward_low
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Re: Pedagogy
was about to comment that the bit in the middle seemed to deliberately detract from the mood. then i read till the end and thought: never mind.I lean back on my chair – it squeaks in protest – and ponder the essence of being a teacher.
if a dev writes it it automatically becomes canon right?
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Guest Poster
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Thank goodness it doesn't. What appears in the VN is canon. Troll-stories by the devs can be safely dismissed.
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Re: Pedagogy
Heresy!Guest Poster wrote:Thank goodness it doesn't. What appears in the VN is canon. Troll-stories by the devs can be safely dismissed.
A writer wrote it, so it must be true!
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cptngarlock
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Re: Pedagogy
8 years out this thing is still cash-money