Disheveled [Ch. 3, 9/18] (undergoing revisions)

[Mahorfeus]

Another excellent one that somehow slipped under my radar. Or maybe I'm just going blind.

[Umber]

Another excellent one that somehow slipped under my radar. Or maybe I'm just going blind.

Hey, thanks. (Oh gosh, expectations. Argh. [/internalweeping])

And while I'm at it, chapter two will be posted soon. I have to do something productive over my summer, after all.

[Steinherz]

Another excellent one that somehow slipped under my radar. Or maybe I'm just going blind.

Hey, thanks. (Oh gosh, expectations. Argh. [/internalweeping])

And while I'm at it, chapter two will be posted soon. I have to do something productive over my summer, after all.

*knows that feel*
I've been waiting patiently for Chapter 2 for quite some time

[forgetmenot]

Another excellent one that somehow slipped under my radar. Or maybe I'm just going blind.

Hey, thanks. (Oh gosh, expectations. Argh. [/internalweeping])

And while I'm at it, chapter two will be posted soon. I have to do something productive over my summer, after all.

*knows that feel*
I've been waiting patiently for Chapter 2 for quite some time

Don't you have a slashfic to be writing?

[RedRover]

Not sure how I didn't see this, but I'm glad I did, albeit a little late. Eagerly awaiting more.

[Jestarr]

Awesome start, very much looking forward to the second chapter when you finally decide to grace us with its presence

[Umber]

Awesome start, very much looking forward to the second chapter when you finally decide to grace us with its presence

The second chapter's finished, but there's some revisions being done (as recommended by my loving editor) so that it'll be better than it should be. Hopefully, I think. Continual improvement.

Despite the recent time restraints (a fancy term for not making the time for work), I'm glad that I can still manage to turn the scraps of my daily schedule's havoc into productivity. Scheduled posts are probably beyond all reach, but I've a mind to compensate for that in more ways than one. Mostly by working hard, since I can't really work more. :p

[motokid108]

I eagerly await the continuation. This forum could use some more Natsume. I debate writing a route myself.

[Umber]

After four, five months-ish of undeclared hiatus, Disheveled will be back on track within a week, or an approximation of some similar length. College applications and senior-related high school projects haven't necessarily been getting in the way of progress, but they sure were the biggest factors as to why such progress has been so slow. That, and my own irresponsibility of not taking care of those ahead of time.

Adolescent life really gets to you.

Aaaargh.

But in any case, an update's due relatively soon. And hopefully my application to Purdue. Ciao!

Edit: Three weeks delay from unexpected senior projects, as well as numerous personal events. I apologize (again) for having a terrible, if not non-existent, schedule.

I want this to update as much as you guys do.

[AntonSlavik020]

Good to see this is getting an update. I loved the first chapter, and Natsume and Naomi don't appear in enough stories.

[TacticalBacon]

After four, five months-ish of undeclared hiatus, Disheveled will be back on track within a week, or an approximation of some similar length. College applications and senior-related high school projects haven't necessarily been getting in the way of progress, but they sure were the biggest factors as to why such progress has been so slow. That, and my own irresponsibility of not taking care of those ahead of time.

Adolescent life really gets to you.

Aaaargh.

But in any case, an update's due relatively soon. And hopefully my application to Purdue. Ciao!

Looking forward to it

[motokid108]

Bring forth the one named Natsume!

[Lianam]

I must say; this was very good, I'd like to see more.

[Kyler Thatch]

I liked the banter between Akio and Natsume (and Naomi). He's a fun character.

Mutou felt awkward, though. Not the usual Mutou-awkward, more of a "this is not my mental image of him" awkward. But that might just be me.

[Munchenhausen]

I don't know what this story makes me feel, but I feel it.
It's a pleasant feel to eat pasties to, at least.
The indecision she feels towards Naomi is quite relatable for some reason, and I can't wait to see of she does go for it!
Love your depiction of them both, mate! Keep it up!