Rin Drawing - Feels

[doctorkolo]

I got Rin's neutral ending and HOLY SHIT did I ever get a feel!
Drawing this made me feel slightly less sad.
Drawn with Sharpie pen.
Please let me know what you think.

Last time I uploaded art I was told that the image was a little too large, so I'm attaching a compressed image.
but if you want to see the full size:
http://doctorkolo.deviantart.com/art/Ri ... -356403930

[ReCodes]

good concept but the shading is too much and overall, it's overused
correct me if i'm wrong

[doctorkolo]

good concept but the shading is too much and overall, it's overused
correct me if i'm wrong

Yes, I suppose I really went to town with the cross hatching. Still, I definitely intended for it to be WAY TOO DARK. (Though not the most appealing style I suppose)
Thanks for the feedback.

[KeiichiO]

Poor Rin

I like it overall. I think the shading is magnificent. I can't say it's too dark because I don't know the situation. The only problem I have is that her neck is a bit long and her head and eye are also a bit large. Other than that, good job. It really shows your abilities and potential

[win746]

Oh hey its you, I saw your post on FJ. Nice drawing once again, but I think the eyes are a bit too big, otherwise I really like it.

[Sgt Spice]

I also saw this on fj. I think it is really nice, I like the shading.

[Dream]

If you don't mind me asking, what is FJ?

Also, i think this is a good illustration and has a lot of attitude/potential. Like others have said the eyes are a bit too big and other proportion issues seem to dimmer the illustration a bit, and the shading could probably complement the intent better as cel-shading instead of cross-hatched gradation. So i think it's those two things (shading and proportion) that if fixed/improved, would make this an awesome illustration.

I really like it, by the way.

[doctorkolo]

If you don't mind me asking, what is FJ?

FJ is Funnyjunk, I uploaded it there too.
http://www.funnyjunk.com/channel/katawa ... s/YkdnGLx/

And thanks for the tips. From all of you. I do want to improve.
It sounds like giant anime-style eyes are unpopular, so I'll try to make more reasonably sized eyes in my next drawing.
As for the cross-hatching, well, I really did that for my own personal amusement. (Takes fucking forever, but it's sooo much fun, lol.)
I'm cooking up another piece of KS fan art, hopefully I'll have it done by the end of the weekend.

[neio]

Nice work. The mouth is underdone, or maybe it's too much shading on the face that makes the mouth hard to distinguish.