Poor attempt at drawing and idea

[udscbt]

I had an idea for a drawing for a while now, but never done it out of fear of it coming out terrible. Today I finally tried to draw it and... ok, it's not really good, but it's not bad either (I think).
Here it is:


Now I have to refine it and colour it, and I think I will do it (probably... maybe... there's a tiny chance), but I mostly posted this to know if you like the concept (and/or have any suggestion).
Since I am not very good at drawing (I think this is the best thing I've ever drawn), if anyone wants to "steal" this idea and make it better, I heartly approve

PS: now that I think about it, maybe I should have added drills to her airstyle

[OtakuNinja]

Nah, make her fast instead. Much easier to draw.

I really like your idea. The last picture I saw when someone attempted to forge all girls together was... scary. This was really great!

[udscbt]

I'm surprised by myself, but I actually took the time to finish it (not that it took much).

Nah, make her fast instead. Much easier to draw.

I really like your idea. The last picture I saw when someone attempted to forge all girls together was... scary. This was really great!

Thank you very much!
Actually, I was really afraid of making a mess when I started drawing all the girls in one character, but it turned out quite well. But I think it worked mostly because it's a chibi, a "grown-up" version drawn by me would definitely have looked "scary".

[Mahorfeus]

How does she feel if she doesn't have hands?

On the serious side, it does look like a really fun idea. As for the artwork itself, I don't think you're giving yourself enough credit. Disclaimer: I use my own artistic ability (or lack thereof) as my benchmark for critique.

[Dream]

Sorry to be a party-pooper, but i find the drawing rather disturbing. It's not because of the technique or anything you can help, but the subject matter is just... Kimochi Warui.

[Silentcook]

Kimochi Warui.

Try again using words everyone can understand without having to delve into a foreign dictionary.

[LordDarknus]

Sorry to be a party-pooper, but i find the drawing rather disturbing. It's not because of the technique or anything you can help, but the subject matter is just... Kimochi Warui.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEwMjszn_PI&feature=player_detailpage#t=170s

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KEDI7SaEW6Y&feature=player_detailpage#t=180s

I think you've been too much into Evangelion lately...

[Oddball]

Kimochi Warui.

Try again using words everyone can understand without having to delve into a foreign dictionary.

So, having looked it up, it's apparently a phrase that doesn't even directly translate. It could mean anything from, "this is disgusting," to "I feel sick," to "this feeling sucks."

So good job using a phrase where nobody can possibly know exactly what you intended.

[Dream]

Man, i didn't imagine an off-hand reference to EoE would cause so much backlash. But you are right, i shouldn't have used a phrase that no one would have understood outside most eva fans. I apologize. And yeah, the phrase is extremely vague and not easy to translate.