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[Comrade]

Italy is not the best place to live in right now...
Most of the Prostetution here is eastern European women exported via the desert, a lot of them die on the way

[Mirage_GSM]

And, finally, a picky detail-oriented question: How can someone look down a fully-buttoned-and-ribboned Yamaku blouse? It
The Italian "sex workers" count is estimated, by a research commissioned by the Equal opportunity Department of the Italian government in 2007, to be about 45,000. The percentage of slaves is estimated to be 10%-15% if we count the minors (7-8% if we don't, but we do) and almost the totality of them is actually foreign women.

Exactly. They are foreign women, whom nobody misses and who probably would be deported when the police finds them. None of this applies to hanako. She was abducted the next town over.

[Doomish]

And, finally, a picky detail-oriented question: How can someone look down a fully-buttoned-and-ribboned Yamaku blouse? It seems to hug to the neck/sternum rather closely.

I've only just now remembered that it's pretty much impossible to look down the Yamaku uniform because of the bow, so I changed it to just have the lecher staring at her tits like a creepy goofball instead. Same basic concept except it's a lot easier to do.

I like your assessment of the story, though! Nothing specifically explicit has happened yet, which I'm glad you noted!

[Dream]

Is anyone else a bit weirded out by the way Lilly acted at the mention of the bar and the idea that Hanako might be outside town, plus some of her mannerisms with Hisao? Maybe it's just me.

In any case, excellent story, it's surprising how well it fits with the KS characters even though it's so dark. And the feeling of "anyone can die" certainly help to give a very tense tone to it.

[nemz]

Is anyone else a bit weirded out by the way Lilly acted at the mention of the bar and the idea that Hanako might be outside town, plus some of her mannerisms with Hisao? Maybe it's just me.

It's not just you. Perhaps she's getting ready to leave for Scotland and is annoyed that Hisao is not turning out to be as good for Hanako as she hoped? Either that or... nah, that's crazy.

[Bi-Polar Hernandez]

Goddamnit Doomish you accomplished making me uncomfortable. That's all I can really say at the moment.

You bastard.

[Doomish]

Either that or... nah, that's crazy.

Oho? Do you have a theory? Please, share it with the class. :3c

[nemz]

Nah, I wouldn't even call it a theory. Just a gut reaction that doesn't actually make any sense at all when I really ponder it, and in all likelihood is completely off-base. And now it's been built up so much for no reason that I'm definately not sharing it.

[Mirage_GSM]

And the feeling of "anyone can die" certainly help to give a very tense tone to it.

I get that feeling from every story just by reading the name "Doomish" as the author...

[griffon8]

And the feeling of "anyone can die" certainly help to give a very tense tone to it.

I get that feeling from every story just by reading the name "Doomish" as the author...

QFFT!

This is why I don't read Doomish's stories until I know where it's going. So I haven't read this one.

[Dream]

This is why I don't read Doomish's stories until I know where it's going. So I haven't read this one.

You should. It has maids.

[Antor]

This is why I don't read Doomish's stories until I know where it's going. So I haven't read this one.

You should. It has maids.

subtlety cruel... I like it.

[YourFavAnon]

This story is really, really going to end up rubbing me the wrong way, I can already feel it coming..

[Doomish]

Forget it.

[FlyingRiceBowl]

Another interesting development into the story, well done.