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Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Forget it.
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FlyingRiceBowl
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Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
That was...
Word's can't explain how well-written this is.
Word's can't explain how well-written this is.
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BlackWaltzTheThird
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Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Oh dear. I don't want to hate you, dude. At least that content warning hasn't come into effect yet. But it's a sombre warning for chapters to come. Oh dear.
BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop - my fanfiction portal topic. Contains links to all my previous works, plus starting now any new ones I may produce (or reproduce)! Please, check it out!
BlackWaltz's Pastebin - for those who prefer to read things with no formatting and stuff. It's mostly the same as in my thread. Also contains assorted other writing!
BlackWaltz's Pastebin - for those who prefer to read things with no formatting and stuff. It's mostly the same as in my thread. Also contains assorted other writing!
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Vladimir Zedong.(get it?)doomish wrote:Len Mao
A well written story and an interesting plot, I wonder what hisao would think if hanako dissaperd after a fight.
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Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
This will either be horrible or incredible. Possibly both. The forum drama alone should be worth the effort.
Rin > Shizune > Emi > Hanako > Lilly
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
We're probably going to find out!Comrade wrote: A well written story and an interesting plot, I wonder what hisao would think if hanako dissaperd after a fight.
Thank you all for your comments so far, no matter how uncertain they may be. I'm looking forward to this as much as the rest of you, after all.
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Negativedarke
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Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
I'm pretty afraid to follow this. Hopefully it won't end horribly and leave me deppressed for a week.
On another note their is no being more contemptable than a Human trafficker. Need money? How about you and your girlfriend get beaten to death by a sackful of quarters. It's going to be far faster and more merciful than what happens to your victims.
On another note their is no being more contemptable than a Human trafficker. Need money? How about you and your girlfriend get beaten to death by a sackful of quarters. It's going to be far faster and more merciful than what happens to your victims.
"Misha, I don't think Chocoholism is a real disability."
"But the School's Entrance Board does Hi-Chan. Wahaha~"
"But the School's Entrance Board does Hi-Chan. Wahaha~"
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Um, uh.. Interesting.
I'm looking forward for more. I hope this doesn't ends badly and
I'm looking forward for more. I hope this doesn't ends badly and
Negativedarke wrote:leave me depressed for a week.
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
damn it, this last chapter almost made me physically ill! can't say that I like that feeling but I just can't stop reading...
that bar douche bag has some serious bullshit going on in his head..
awesome story looking forward to the next chapter!
that bar douche bag has some serious bullshit going on in his head..
awesome story looking forward to the next chapter!
I made just one error with KS, I played the good endings first... now I'm recovering the feels from the first bad one.
Can't see Can't Hear But love discussion topic (Manwa on disability and love)
waiting for Con Amore a WIP visual novel, a tale of love and music
Can't see Can't Hear But love discussion topic (Manwa on disability and love)
waiting for Con Amore a WIP visual novel, a tale of love and music
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
Forget it.
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BlackWaltzTheThird
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Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop - my fanfiction portal topic. Contains links to all my previous works, plus starting now any new ones I may produce (or reproduce)! Please, check it out!
BlackWaltz's Pastebin - for those who prefer to read things with no formatting and stuff. It's mostly the same as in my thread. Also contains assorted other writing!
BlackWaltz's Pastebin - for those who prefer to read things with no formatting and stuff. It's mostly the same as in my thread. Also contains assorted other writing!
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Archangel Gabriel
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Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
I will MURDER YOU WHERE YOU SLEEP, DOOMISH. Don't think I won't find it. I know where every single person on the internet lives, and I've got the power of Bowser, Ganon, AND Dracula on my side! 
Routes: Lilly=Hanako=Shizune>Emi>Rin
Girls: Shizune=Lilly=Hanako>Emi>Rin=Misha
So many people cheering on Hisao cheating with Misha....To cheat on popular people is horrendous. To cheat on unpopular people is harmless?
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
Any specific reason for the chapter 3 rewrite? (I read the original on pastebin)
Rin>Emi>Shizune=Hanako>Lilly
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
I felt like changing the plot's progression to be a little bit slower-paced. Instead of jumping right in, I had Len Mao stick to his word from Chapter 2 and start Hanako off small. It's changed on Pastebin now too.JTC545 wrote:Any specific reason for the chapter 3 rewrite? (I read the original on pastebin)