How do you get the impression that isn't known?OtakuNinja wrote:I just want to add a little thing to this masterpiece: Miki lost her left hand, not her right.
Turn to Stone
Re: Turn to Stone
I found out about Katawa Shoujo through the forums of Misfile. There, I am the editor of Misfiled Dreams.
Completed: 100%, including bonus picture. Shizune>Emi>Lilly>Hanako>Rin
Griffon8's Writing
Completed: 100%, including bonus picture. Shizune>Emi>Lilly>Hanako>Rin
Griffon8's Writing
-
OtakuNinja
- Posts: 1457
- Joined: Sat Jun 16, 2012 10:42 pm
- Location: Sweden
- Contact:
Re: Turn to Stone
I think I saw some parts where the author implied it was the right hand that wasn't there. :3griffon8 wrote:How do you get the impression that isn't known?OtakuNinja wrote:I just want to add a little thing to this masterpiece: Miki lost her left hand, not her right.
But it's 4:00 in the morning, I may be wrong.
Emibro, Hanabro, [Lilly Lover], Rin Kin, Feminist, Two-timer
(Passively working on my KS YouTube series. Someday...)
Re: Turn to Stone
Further proof that the only productive thing to occur after the bars close is regrets.OtakuNinja wrote: But it's 4:00 in the morning, I may be wrong.
"Who are you, that do not know your history?" -Ulysses
Misha Time: United States of Misha Meet the Hakamichis
Awesome, served on the rocks: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! (Check out the Archive for more!)
I wrote a book! Brythain edited it! If you like mystery and history please consider: A Sister's Habit
"You are absolutely insane. And entertaining." -griffon8
Misha Time: United States of Misha Meet the Hakamichis
Awesome, served on the rocks: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! (Check out the Archive for more!)
I wrote a book! Brythain edited it! If you like mystery and history please consider: A Sister's Habit
"You are absolutely insane. And entertaining." -griffon8
-
Total Destruction
- Posts: 326
- Joined: Thu May 10, 2012 5:45 am
- Location: Hit Deborah Cliff with your head to make a hole.
Re: Turn to Stone
It wouldn't surprise me. There's a whole mess of inconsistencies that need to be hammered out in this thing, and I thought I corrected the ONE screwup that I think no one else pointed out in regards to the missing hand. Another hiccup is pretty much par for the course, though I'm really bummed out about that one, because I write with my off-hand just to drive the point home for Chrissakes. Hahah.OtakuNinja wrote:I think I saw some parts where the author implied it was the right hand that wasn't there. :3griffon8 wrote:How do you get the impression that isn't known?OtakuNinja wrote:I just want to add a little thing to this masterpiece: Miki lost her left hand, not her right.
But it's 4:00 in the morning, I may be wrong.
I gotta give this thing and Touchdown Breakdown another sweep, though. Thanks for pointing that out.
Also... "Masterpiece"??? You are too damned kind, but I'LL TAKE IT.
Thank you.
... Danger.
Re: Turn to Stone
I didn't find any. I carefully reread it before asking my question. There were plenty of references to her good hand, and one about it being her only hand, but the only times I noticed where the difference between a hand and a stump were important, you got it right.Total Destruction wrote:It wouldn't surprise me. There's a whole mess of inconsistencies that need to be hammered out in this thing, and I thought I corrected the ONE screwup that I think no one else pointed out in regards to the missing hand. Another hiccup is pretty much par for the course, though I'm really bummed out about that one, because I write with my off-hand just to drive the point home for Chrissakes. Hahah.
I found out about Katawa Shoujo through the forums of Misfile. There, I am the editor of Misfiled Dreams.
Completed: 100%, including bonus picture. Shizune>Emi>Lilly>Hanako>Rin
Griffon8's Writing
Completed: 100%, including bonus picture. Shizune>Emi>Lilly>Hanako>Rin
Griffon8's Writing