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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Story has been moved to another thread. See opening post.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
why are some things in parenthesis?
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Posted all chapters.
Edit: Stuff in quotes is said. Stuff in parenthesis is thought.
Edit: Stuff in quotes is said. Stuff in parenthesis is thought.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Then what are the things that have neither parenthesis nor quotes? If those are thoughts as well, then from where cometh the idea to have some things in parenthesis and most things out of parenthesis.
Either way this is a shit ton of writing and I'll get back to it later. Can't say that the length is a huge turn-on or anything.
Either way this is a shit ton of writing and I'll get back to it later. Can't say that the length is a huge turn-on or anything.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Stuff without parenthesis or quotes is simply narration. And yeah, it's pretty large. Or rather...I dislike episodic releases in both stories and games. So instead of posting one chapter, answering comments for a week, writing another one, retconning the half of the first one, writing two more, getting writers block and not finishing another one for two months etc, etc, I simply refrained from posting the whole thing until all chapters were completed. It's a personal preference.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Wait so a Hanako bad ending and a Lilly Good ending within a Hanako good ending?
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
That's not a bad way to put it.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
...Jesus Christ, this is one of the best KS fanfictions I've ever read. I honestly don't see what other Hanako epilogues could top this one. This is good enough to be it's own route.
I was skeptical when you decided to post it all at once with no feedback, and it did take a LONG time to read, but it was worth it. I really hope you write more because you're an amazing writer.
I particularly liked the last chapter. SO MANY FEELS.
I was skeptical when you decided to post it all at once with no feedback, and it did take a LONG time to read, but it was worth it. I really hope you write more because you're an amazing writer.
I particularly liked the last chapter. SO MANY FEELS.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Just got finished reading. Incredibly great read, man. I kind of almost wish you hadn't ended it, but it ended it quite a reasonable way, so I shouldn't complain.
Great work.
Great work.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Totally worth an hour in my life. Amazing.
Became a better person because of KS. But I was pretty awesome to begin with.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
...That was...I have no words...
Excellent read, thank you for posting it.
Excellent read, thank you for posting it.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
I agree that the formatting is troublesome, but the story itself is quite good. I'm not really a big fan of Hanako or Lilly, but it was a breath of fresh air to see them dealing so directly with their problems rather than immediately becoming mary sues as so often happens in fics featuring them. Your characterization of Hisao also managed the careful balance of clueless and well-intentioned that so often gets skewed to one side only.
Rin > Shizune > Emi > Hanako > Lilly