Alchohol poisoning.grey_ wrote:Why in the name of all that is good and nice is Akira dead and how, you evil fuck.
Wonderful writing. Great.
Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
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Reminded me of an episode of Scrubs, if anyone watches that series.
I felt this was wonderfully done. A twist ending that may be seeing too many appearances, but a very good one nonetheless. Nice job!
I felt this was wonderfully done. A twist ending that may be seeing too many appearances, but a very good one nonetheless. Nice job!
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Which Scrubs episode was it anyway?
The premise does sound vaguely familiar, but it fit so well with all this that I must have thrown it out the window.
The premise does sound vaguely familiar, but it fit so well with all this that I must have thrown it out the window.
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Ben's final episode.Mahorfeus wrote:Which Scrubs episode was it anyway?
The premise does sound vaguely familiar, but it fit so well with all this that I must have thrown it out the window.
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I think my heart caught in my throat for a bit after I read the last lines. Well done.
The reason that popped up in my head explaining Akira's death was that her, being relatively key in the company, was gunned down or killed in some other way related to the yakuza. That'd but a tragic irony in Kenji's 'akira is is the mafia' lines in Lilly's arc.we look like a pair of hit men
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Yea, the idea was taken directly from se03ep14 'My Screw Up' from Scrubs.Mahorfeus wrote:Which Scrubs episode was it anyway?
The premise does sound vaguely familiar, but it fit so well with all this that I must have thrown it out the window.
Originally it had been a short paragraph written by an Anon (who must have previously posted in this thread) a short Katawa Shoujo version of the episodes end.
Much anger and Feels were had by all involved.
I decided to take it a step further and create a short story based on the idea. Believe me, it was not something I took lightly.
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The feels, they have returned *shudder* but this time for Akira, really enjoyed it BTW, and loved the end.
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... The feels I feel for Katawa Shoujo have just surged, combining with the feels that were felt when I watched said episode of Scrubs mentioned a few posts above.
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I hate you sir, I hate you because of the bitch tears that have been shed!
But seriously, excellent work.
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Akira deserves happiness, damn you!
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Well, at least i can read your full writing from beginning. Nice story and somehow....comedy
Don't see if Lilly's family gonna rough to Hisao by the way...
Don't see if Lilly's family gonna rough to Hisao by the way...
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Masterpiece.
And that twist at the end so unexpected, but still probably the best KS Fanfic i have read.
And that twist at the end so unexpected, but still probably the best KS Fanfic i have read.
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Fuuuu. You! .. Loved it, and the feels <3
I'm a massive scrubs fan, so as soon as Hanako said "where do you think we are?" I was suspicious. But I loves S3ep14 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/My_Screw_Up.
A beautiful piece of fanfic, thanks for sharing it. And now to rummage through my DVD collection.
One question? How did Akira die? Dat liver?
I'm a massive scrubs fan, so as soon as Hanako said "where do you think we are?" I was suspicious. But I loves S3ep14 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/My_Screw_Up.
A beautiful piece of fanfic, thanks for sharing it. And now to rummage through my DVD collection.
One question? How did Akira die? Dat liver?
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M. Night Shyamalan would approve of this TWIST!
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Ohhh I felt this one. XD Liked the twist at the end. I didn't realize what was happening until he put the beer on the stone. Very nice. One worth reading.