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[Doomish]

Forget it.

[Elcor]

Interesting view on Miki and Suzu relationship, great writing as always.

[DanjaDoom]

Welp, Doom's written a Suzu and Miki story. Time for me to retire.

[Bi-Polar Hernandez]

"Oh my god, you're naked." I blink a few times, sitting up.

"Oh my god, I'M naked." I look down at myself.

Miki grins, throwing her arms wide. "Surprise!" Her gesture looks a little off-balanced with one hand, but I get it nonetheless.

This made me laugh when you first wrote this in chat. Made me laugh again when I reread it.

[nemz]

Japanese schools have class on saturdays.

...and 4 fingers is fine but the mighty stumpfist is out of bounds? wtf Snoozu?

[Bi-Polar Hernandez]

Who cares? It's porn!

[Total Destruction]

Great success.

[Scissorlips]

That was hot. Have to say I enjoyed your Saki/Rika story better though, it felt more... natural, I guess. Either way, great as always.

[BlackWaltzTheThird]

I have no statistical backing for this, but I think Miki gets more girl-on-girl than Misha does, around here. But shit, if it's all like this then I really couldn't care less. This kind of friends-who-have-seen-each-other-naked-and-make-jokes-about-fucking-each-other-raw relationship kind of reminds me of the relationship between myself and one of my friends, except she hasn't seen me naked (granted, I haven't seen her fully naked in person, but...) though I haven't gotten any out of it. =/

I liked the allusion to Emi being at her 'Emiest', though i find it a bit unbelievable that Miki would have so much as raised a single drop of sweat, let alone a film, after running just four laps. Many of the lines in this one elicted a chuckle, or a grin at the very least. The one about the penis (or lack thereof) made me laugh pretty loud. That said, you did write that they had experimented before, even going so far as to involve Miki's stump; surely, then, Suzu would have knowledge of oral? Eh, who am I to question porn logic? It's meant to be titillating, not logical. Great work, as always.
Cheers, BlackWaltz.

[nemz]

Wait a sec... was that '4 max' a joke about her only having 4 non-thumb fingers?

[Doomish]

Wait a sec... was that '4 max' a joke about her only having 4 non-thumb fingers?

Ahaha holy shit, it took a day and a half for someone to get it, but it finally happened. Congrats!

[Brogurt]

Wait a sec... was that '4 max' a joke about her only having 4 non-thumb fingers?

Ahaha holy shit, it took a day and a half for someone to get it, but it finally happened. Congrats!

>implying that people didn't get it immediately but just didn't think it was funny enough to comment on

[Doomish]

Wait a sec... was that '4 max' a joke about her only having 4 non-thumb fingers?

Ahaha holy shit, it took a day and a half for someone to get it, but it finally happened. Congrats!

>implying that people didn't get it immediately but just didn't think it was funny enough to comment on

That is in fact what I am implying, Katawa Shoujo Forums user Brogurt

[Bagheera]

That is in fact what I am implying, Katawa Shoujo Forums user Brogurt

I didn't get it immediately. I thought it was funny.

(also, good story.)

[Leaty]

Wait a sec... was that '4 max' a joke about her only having 4 non-thumb fingers?

Ahaha holy shit, it took a day and a half for someone to get it, but it finally happened. Congrats!

I laughed. It took me longer than I'd care to admit.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this. I've always counted Miki and Suzu as the "fourth pair" of KS girls, so I like any stories where they're particularly close.

The one thing I didn't find believable was Miki waking up early. There's no way that girl ever wakes up early.