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Once again, 2 immediate back to back posts. For anyone using an alternate layout/color scheme besides the original, there's a spot that incorporated some stylistic coloring using the original color scheme in mind in this Scene that might stand out more when not on the base set-up. Should still be co...

Thanks for the comments! First I'll respond to SilentFrost's... I started reading this with the intention of giving feedback. I think the biggest bit of feedback i can give, however, is that i want more . :shock: Well, that's great news to my ears. Glad to hear you enjoyed it. I only have a couple s...

I'm back, and as promised have read another one of your works. And I've gotta say: Definitely worth it. While I can only say I really liked Avenues of Communication, I can easily say I loved reading this story. As Mirage said, it was a strange pairing that I did not expect to work, but you made it f...

Damn. This was a really, really good story. Gut wrenching, tragic, beautiful, and well-written. It even feels consistent with the main game's version of these characters despite being written for a less complete version of them. In any case, it was an amazing read and a truly wonderful experience fr...

This was a really fun and enjoyable read from start to finish for me. Though flawed, this story captured my interest from the first sentence to the last and it was well worth my time. I think I'll just hop straight into the ramble now. I'll start of with the bad so we can end on a good note ;) First...

Certainly an interesting experience, this story. I'll start by saying my overall experience was a positive one with this story, though it did leave me conflicted a few times. Usually I have a better intro to theses things but I don't really have one for this story so I'll just get into it. (As alway...

Really enjoyed this update! Always love to see the main couple interact with others outside of their relationship, and Akira definitely needs more interactions with people. You've done a great job emphasizing just how shitty Akira's life has been up to this point. She goes from a "probably"...

I have your writing pasted in Word so that I can read it offline later. It's really long: 2 chapters in and already 23k+ words, that's already 1/10 of the entire 70 Chapters of my writing, and 1/20 of Sisterhood (~456k words). :shock: and it's only scene 1 so far... Contrary to your work, I started...

Finally got around to reading this one! Pretty enjoyable so far. I like the different setting from where most are set and the blunt and forward approach with the relationship feels appropriate and well done (even if I do miss the environment afforded by Yamaku, but it makes complete sense and that's...

If you had told me 5 months ago I'd spend the better part of a month reading a fanfiction that was well over 400k words long, I'd say you were crazy. If you were to then tell me that that fanfiction was for a eroge game born from 4Chan and centered around disabled girls, was a visual novel dating si...

(Continued from previous post) ---------------- The next few days come and go much faster. Emi and her mother returned that night with a few of the books from my room. I had already read one of them, but I’ll reread it if I manage to finish the other two before I’m out of here. We make some small ta...

A quick note, unfortunately the Renai seems to have a 60k character limit on posts, so this half will be split into 2 posts right next to each-other. The entirety of this scene will be here, just in 2 back to back posts. Thanks for reading! And here is... ________________________________ Scene 1: Br...

Hey there! What you said about "want to improve my writing capabilities as a whole" strikes me, as this is exactly the same reason I'm writing my own work . I wish you success in your writing. Thanks! I haven't had the opportunity to read your's just yet, but it has been on my radar and I...

Got around to reading this in between writing, editing, reading other fics, thinking about others, and all the other things I'm distracting myself with and I've got to say, Tal, this is pretty damn good so far. As is my nature, I'm probably going to ramble here and there will be very little structur...

That was sweet - you've obvioulsy put a lot of thought an effort into this! It's hard to see them battling with their issues, but life's like that - issues don't just go away overnight (Emi's gonna Emi after all). Life doesn't always let us run away from our troubles. This is a theme I felt like Em...