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- Sun Jun 10, 2018 7:53 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
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Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route
In 1977, the deadliest aviation disaster in history occurred on a runway in Tenerife. And if you've heard the story once, it hurts every time you hear it again. Every sentence brings the disaster closer, and you wish that even one thing would change, and stop it from happening. That's what Act 2 wa...
- Sat Jun 09, 2018 11:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 521344
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Happy Birthday, Misha!)
!!!WARNING!!! This is a joke chapter, for those who would rather not read about sexytimes Just as I’m about to respond, the door flies open, revealing a panicked-looking Kenji. After glancing around, he returns to his standard demeanor. He probably thinks it makes him look cool. I’d be more inclined...
- Sat Jun 09, 2018 11:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 521344
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Happy Birthday, Misha!)
I hesitate. Up to this point, she’s done any undressing by herself, and I’ve given her all the space she’ll let me give. But when she comes out and asks me like that, how could I say no? Why would I say no? With unsteady hands, I reach for her bow and fruitlessly fumble at it for a minute or so whil...
- Sat Jun 09, 2018 11:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 521344
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Happy Birthday, Misha!)
The relative quiet of the trip to the cafeteria and the cafeteria itself remind me that it's still quite early. As soon as we enter, a familiar pink figure makes a beeline toward us. “Good news, Hicchan~! Shicchan said that this is an important chance to represent the school! So~! I get to give you ...
- Sat Jun 09, 2018 11:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 521344
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Happy Birthday, Misha!)
The first thing to greet me when I wake up is a pair of arms wrapping themselves around my head. “Hicchan~! You’re okay! I was so worried~!” It takes me a moment, since I’m still waking up, but I quickly realize that this isn’t Misha hugging me. It’s my mom. With that established, the next voice I h...
- Mon May 28, 2018 2:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 953543
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180528 'The Ties That Bind')
So, to start, a few bits of science (if I'm remembering my biology lessons correctly): Sperm can survive up to three days in a properly receptive environment. The egg remains viable for up to 5 days post-ovulation. Accounting for the standard length menstrual cycle of roughly a month, that means tha...
- Sun May 27, 2018 11:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 953543
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180514 'Scar-Crossed Lovers')
Well, there is the old saying that there's one way to be good, and a thousand ways to be bad. Not certain how much I believe that. On the other hand, I feel I may have a reputation for finding fault in works that nearly everyone else praises, so... Short or long? - Short are certainly easier to get ...
- Wed May 23, 2018 7:09 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Consolidated Calendar of Events
- Replies: 20
- Views: 39465
Re: Consolidated Calendar of Events
You put a lot of hardwork and effort into this. But you don't start with Hisao's heart attack, so I'm going to dock points. No perfect score for you. Hisao's heart attack likely happened around Sunday 25 Feb 2007. It was the coldest day in Japan that year; in fact, it was the only day in Yokohama (...
- Tue May 22, 2018 2:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Consolidated Calendar of Events
- Replies: 20
- Views: 39465
Consolidated Calendar of Events
For a number of reasons, I decided to revisit each and every scene in KS and take detailed notes on timing, in the attempt to put together a comprehensive calendar of what happened when. Unfortunately, this wasn't simply a Herculean task, but downright impossible. Aside from unavoidable contradictio...
- Sun May 20, 2018 9:09 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Within a Looking Glass – A Rika pseudo-route
- Replies: 112
- Views: 50153
Re: Within a Looking Glass – A Rika pseudo-route
Well, you started and finished the entire route in less time than it's taken me to finish a single chapter. While that's probably more a reflection on me than you, the fact remains that you got this up quickly,which is quite impressive. As always, my standard congratulation for finishing. That's an ...
- Sat May 19, 2018 8:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 953543
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180514 'Scar-Crossed Lovers')
Another catch-up post. Nomiya POV - When I saw this announcement, my first thought was "I hope this isn't the one with the pedophilia allegations." So there's that. There are ways to make an unlikeable character sympathetic without inventing some past trauma (that happens to be completely ...
- Sun Apr 15, 2018 7:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 953543
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180409 'Two Sides Of The Same Coin')
Oh, my. Time for a little catsup... The Escape Not really much that can be said about that one. It looks to be that an artist decided to draw two girls an an implausible situation (rainforest in lingerie), and then the author, presumably on a drunk bet, agreed to write a fic. Insofar as it meets the...
- Thu Apr 12, 2018 8:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/6/23)
- Replies: 97
- Views: 61593
Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (S8 Submission 12/24/17)
Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow (You Are Here) Two Halves Make a Ho...
- Sat Mar 17, 2018 5:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Within a Looking Glass – A Rika pseudo-route
- Replies: 112
- Views: 50153
Re: Within a Looking Glass – A Rika pseudo-route
Rika ponders a moment. “Imagine if one of her sleep episodes happened at just the wrong moment. Fall out a window, don’t move out of the way of a car, that kind of thing. I don’t know what happened, I just know it was one of the funerals we had last year” No, that's not how Narcolepsy works. With t...
- Tue Mar 06, 2018 4:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 953543
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180305 'Madam Lillian's Specialty Service')
I'm not certain that this deserves to be considered a "good" fic, for what it's worth, but I'd certainly list it as "required reading". Spelling and grammar seem solid enough, the pacing goes at a nice clip. The flow of events in that final chapter feel a little "off" (...