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Well - indeed, it does seem like an attempt to convert the neutral end to the good end, at first glance (and the subsequent ones, I'm afraid). However, as this doesn't look like it's a oneshot neutral end reversal..I'm interested on what directions you're going to have this fic go through. Looking f...

Inb4 "this girl is the best!" wars. I will be doing minor characters, for a change of pace. Yuuko Looks: 9/10 - I'm a sucker for the adorkable meganekko look. She's so cute! Personality: 7/10 - Not that it was given much focus, but she is acting the adorable clumsy librarian part a little ...

Shizune in her bad ending.

Seriously. That CG struck me down, hard. No need for dramatic music. No need for dramatic dialogue. Just her, in that state.

- that, man.

I'm all for reading it all over again. Nothing beats a rereading and more episodes of fuzzy or heartbreaking feels.

Good narrative, but I think you can benefit from a beta writer, as there are numerous points in the work that had quite awkward language in them.

Also, I won't be surprised if Hisao dies of a heart attack in the end. Dead Space can be pretty..stressing.

I only have one complaint.

You didn't use the original Twilight Zone introduction.

Still, it's a worthy idea. I'm looking forward to it.

Simple and sweet. I like it. It's a good break from plot-heavy fics full of either Comfort or Cold Iron and Breathlessly.

I hope to see more of these!

Great writing! Will look forward to the next chapter. I love it!

Frankly, I forgot where I heard about KS. However, I'm glad I did. It didn't change my life, true, but it has been one of the most emotional works of fiction I have ever had the pleasure of having. Thank you, 4LS, from the bottom of my heart. What else can I say? You have created something here - so...

^ that's me, btw. My stats are at my sig! Yeah, my folding's slow. -.-

Update: She won't answer me. I'm feeling terribly alone right now, but she's been ignoring me all day. I haven't really talked to her since the day after she kissed me... I don't know what's going on... Talk to her! She thinks you didn't like her back. D: Anyway, my turn. Right now, I'm in a very h...

Emi's bad ending hit me hard, too. I can see it has the same vein as Hanako's - main reason why I refuse to go for her bad ending. It can only be much, much, much worse.