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They would all listen to Justin Bieber, duh.

Tomate wrote:
Much better.

I not only laughed out loud, but I spontaneously clapped my hands as well; I never do that. This means this is the best joke I've ever seen on the internet.

@Hellbereth
So far writing a good Rin haiku has always eluded me for some reason. Yours is quite perfect, thank you!

I don't know how I missed the last two entries of this, they are great!

Great story, really like the writing! More coming?

In this poem I tried to imagine the nightmares that Emi has and the effect they have on her, trying to reflect upon her feelings and to find an answer as to why these dreams play such an important part in defining her personality. I was also reflecting upon my own nightmares and a particular ...

This isn't rocket science, just get some decent sleep. You've obviously have never had prolonged periods of bad sleep. When your sleep is severly disrupted IT IS rocket science to get back on track. "With insomnia, nothing's real. Everything's far away. Everything's a copy of a copy of a copy ...

Hey man, just a tip - you need to completely cut off the energy drinks - it is a vicious cycle. It is an addiction similar to coffee but much stronger - research indicates coffee doesn't make you more alert it just drags you into a cycle where you feel less alert when you go without coffee and ...

When I finished reading this I realised that I have a smile on my face.... That's good, right? Pls more!

I agree with your comment on the setup, the horror film reference might indeed be unnecessary. Thank you for caring and for wanting to improve my story! I think I might have misinterpreted your comments, but your second message sets everything straight I guess... Now I have big shoes to fill! This ...

@FishyBroski: Glad that I caught your interest! The whole plot is pretty much developed in my head and I am now working on the details, I hope I can keep your interest until the end! Next chapter coming end of the week. @Ascended Flutist: Thank you for the extended critique. In retort to your ...

I think it is pretty clean, currently, for it is a second draft but I will keep editing it as I add new content. New chapters to follow weekly. Enjoy!

Chapter 1: A perfect day for a picnic. “Denn die Todten reiten Schnell… (For the dead travel fast…)” Bram Stoker, Dracula It was a perfect day for a picnic when we found the first body. I remember now, with some bitter amusement, that my first thought when I woke up on that Sunday was that the day w ...

Dark Love Eternal – A Horror Story Prelude: The End "No man knows till he experiences it, what it is like to feel his own life-blood drawn away into the woman he loves." Bram Stoker, Dracula There are no shadows here, no twilight. Shadows would imply there is at least the suggestion of a source of l ...

Lilly, Emi and Rin. And that's only because I've not completed the other paths yet! :) If I had to choose just one it would be a close call between those three but I would go with Lilly! Rin's path had a lot of feels but she will be a handful in RL, Emi might not be at...well...at my intellectual ...