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Written pretty well, but the content is pretty horrible. It balances out it nicely.

I don't usually post or read much of anything, but this was well worth it. Excellent.

I haven't been here in a while, so I curiously clicked on this. Shame to say, I missed it.

Though my opinion is of little worth, I agree with Leaty. I'm not sure an Iwanako route could work at all, unless it was super contrived or something. Though others maybe bend the rules sometimes, I like to ...

Well, so far all you've did is rewrite a story we've already been told, except adding in a scene where Hisao gets beat up.

Frankly, that little addition does more to wreck the feeling of the story than it does to add to it. Not only does it stick out like a sore thumb, but it completely changes ...

So after a couple weeks of thinking, the beginning of this fic does not fit into the grand scheme of things.

I will eventually post a new phase 1, but for now, I'm taking the original down.

Post post post.

I dunno if I commented when this was posted elsewhere, but I really enjoyed it. It's short, but it has just the right amount of depth to feel appropriate.

bro, nah.

This probably won't go anywhere anytime soon. The meds I'm on mess me up too much to write much of anything these days. I had that part of DS done for about 2-3 weeks before posting it.

Also not a fan of commitment, unfortunately. I might just stick to one-shots.

Chapter 1: The Setup

It's been five months since I resigned.

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After that fateful day, I returned home once more. Closing the door behind me, I sighed. The bottle of whiskey on the end table of the living room called my name, but for now, I ignored it. Leaning back against the front door, I ...

nah bro, nah.

Oof, right in the feels.

hurf

lol this story sucked

Man, whenever I start losing motivation to write, I come back and read this story, then find myself inspired again. Great work.

No kidding. I read about as far as the first pic of a catgirl, and then I just gave up. It's nice that you're willing to give constructive criticism, but seriously, cut the shit. If I wanted a bunch of pictures of catgirls, I'd type "pictures of catgirls" into my search bar and look them up. :V ...