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*Takes a deep breath* *Forcibly blows out air* *Cough**Cough* Gah! This is so dusty! I haven't touched this thread since September, it feels like it's been forever since I've posted something (well three months to be exact). So there's some bad news and good news. First the bad news: I don't have an...

Man, it's been a while since I've been on here. You've put up quite a lot of new stuff so... Arabesque Ha, ha, ahahahaha.... *cough* Excuse me for that. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It's always fun to write out a scene to classical music don't you think. Even since reading that Hanako likes karaoke in h...

I don't think this chapter did anything for me, simply because there wasn't much to it, which is ironic considering I gave completely opposite criticism to Act 1-12 Considering that I spend most of my time each week studying, I'll respond in a method that doubles as me reviewing for midterms. So in...

*Sigh* It actually makes me a little sad that the uni doesn't allow me much free time to write as I would like. The only chances I get to write are Wednesday and Friday nights, but only for a few hours. Oh well, what can I do about it now. Anyway, it's about time that we get started on Act 2. So wit...

Ok, now that I finally finished Act 1, I can take some time to reflect a bit on what has happened. I'm writing this because I need/want to. I need to reread all of my chapters to make sure that I didn't forget some important details and to proofread and rewrite some parts. I want to do this because ...

First off, some mistakes. "You need t-to go take a show. We've got plans for t-tonight." So was the show Hanako in her bra and boxers? I finish my shower and dry off, shaving nice and clean and making sure I'm the most presentable I've been in a couple of months. Maybe it's just me, but I ...

Ah, this is what I enjoy about writing things one chapter at a time. I get to see what you guys think and how I can improve. So let's see.... Also,I prefer Claire de Lune to First Arabesque, but opinions. Hm... It appears we have some similar thought processes. When I originally planned for the musi...

It took a while, but it's finally here. The new and improved Chapter 12. I can finally say that I've complete the first act of Bloodline. You have no idea how this makes me feel. I'm so surprised that I've been so dedicated on working on my story. Usually when I get involved with things like this, I...

Mind if I ask what you mean by World Build? World Build, World Building, I forget what the actually term for it is. Since Bloodline takes place 24 years after the end of the VN, I have to find a place for all of the characters. I need to decide what they've done and where they are now. You'll see t...

YourFavAnon wrote:So, can we be expecting a longer chapter than usual? I mean, the first writing of 12 was pretty lengthy, but just missed on a lot of points.

That's the million dollar question here. To be honest, I don't know how long new version is going to be. It'll be what it is. Just wait and see.

Thank you everyone for supporting my decision. I won't make the same mistake twice. This might seem a little impatient, but do you have a possible ETA? Or are you going to try to just do it without putting a semi-deadline on it? Either way I'm fine, I'd just like to have something to look forward to...

Okay, so I've got so explaining to do before I do anything at this point. So I went back and reread all of my chapters for my author's note that I was going to post (It's not complete, I'm still working on it.) and I've read all of your posts about the last chapter. I went back and reread chapter tw...

Ok, so I failed to release this chapter by my self-imposed deadline. But come on, this chapter is three times longer than the longest chapter I've written so far. It took more time than I had originally planned. Frankly, I'm surprised I was only a day late. Anyway, a big thank you goes out to every...

I have to admit, I didn't expect this to be going through the Manly Picnic route. I'm intrigued. So far your story has been pretty much a slice of life kind. While that can work for some short stories, it doesn't transition well to longer ones. Yours has been lacking a conflict for quite some time ...

You are an Ass Face, you know that? :O With each new part we learn more about Hisao, and we progress into Yaso 's life, and then BAM Part is over and I have to wait for the next one. You Cock Tease. >:) I'm starting to see where your plot is going... Which, considering my track record of failing to...