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Two more wonderful chapters, thank you

The plot seem to have quicken, not that I'm complaining

I enjoy the introspective ones just as equally

Just so I don't sound like a blithering idiot, this is about Lilly listening to Akira and Niji, right?

Very interesting, I had a lot of doubts about Akira's never present "boyfriend" during the game too

This is a one-shot? Or do you plan to do additional chapters?

Actually expected for Hanako to see Lilly and Hisao making out as she runs up to them and confess her feelings for Hisao

Dont know if I'd put the ending in the "dawwww' or 'depressing' category

Hmmm maybe the 'bittersweet' category like your "All I Have" story

Bah, DAT AMBIVALENCE

Mirage_GSM wrote: I'm not sure why her boyfriend shouldn't have been Hisao. Lilly left and married someone else, so Hisao would definitely be an option.

the identify of her murdered cheating BF is still uncertain

so ... I guess you like to make your characters all batshit insane ... I see now

BlackRockHanako wrote: I think Treading Water is probably my favourite thing in here too, so i'm glad you like it! Uh, what exactly do you want more of? Hanako and Hisao's blossoming friendship in Emi's route?

it was so sweet, I didn't want it to end, that's all

which means you did an awesome job with it

this is the most EFFed up Hanako fanfic I've read so far wtf man? and how does she go nearly 2 weeks without the swat team breaking down her dorm room door? this is yamaku, remember (Hisao mentions one time what a beautiful morning it was and how he'd love to play hookie, but being at yamaku means m...

Quite odd ... yet interesting. Please do continue. I would like to see who this man she loved is. Stating that Lilly was pretty much arranged to be married to a guy she didn't love by her parents, rules Hisao out. *rubs chin* edit: I mean, it rules Hisao out as the person that married Lilly. I'm won...

Good to see Old Hanako has DAT OCTOGENARIAN SEX DRIVE

I don't see this story as any sort of trolling attempt at hanabros, I see as a bold, daring attempt at something new I don't see how you can say he hates Hanako, either. He has a collection of chocolatey Hanako tales if that's more of your thing. The original version, my biggest complaint was that t...

Here are some questions I had while reading your stories The Collector Is Kenji an undercover homicide detective at Yamaku? How old would he be passing off as a high school student? Call Me Lilly Hisao seems to be taking his girlfriend's troubling psychological issues a little too well ... ok, that ...

Ah, the Unified Shoujo Theory

Excellent so far

Aw man, why'd you end it right at the part I want to read more of? Face_Sad

Hadokant wrote:Actually after reading it again,
It actually was pretty good
I mean don't like the idea of it but the story and writing itself was pretty good

Actually, everything about was intentionally cheesy and terrible

That looks more like the art to my redoing your original version ending