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So, as some of you (*cough*Meal*cough*) have pointed out, the last chapter wasn't my best. I happen to agree. Hopefully this chapter will be a good return to form :) Anyway, comments and critiques are GREATLY appreciated My jimmies won't be rustled, it's cool. Chapter 4: She Said She Said I awake to...

So, as some of you (*cough*Meal*cough*) have pointed out, the last chapter wasn't my best. I happen to agree. Hopefully this chapter will be a good return to form :) Anyway, comments and critiques are GREATLY appreciated My jimmies won't be rustled, it's cool. Chapter 4: She Said She Said I awake to...

Kenji is the true Master of Romance. Hisao just needs to get on his level.

The O.H.L. wrote:Please please PLEASE capitalize the word I. For fucks sake, I'm not trying to offend you but god damn, I just hate seeing uncapitilized I's.

Uhhh...ok

Really? Huh, that's weird, the wiki pretty much described him as being a big narcissist. Bah. Yeah, he is presented as a narcissist in the game, but that's just how it appears since you are playing as Lenneth. If you look at it out of Lenneth's view, he appears as just obsessed over Lenneth herself...

Nice, nice. I did get the basic attributes down (Lezard is a narcissist ,Lelouch is a schemer, etc.) and just flanderized the hell out of them, heh Lezard would actually be the opposite of a narcissist since in Valkyrie Profile he really doesn't go on about himself. He only obsesses on Lenneth. Rea...

Just remember that the more the reality is stretched for comedy the more outlandish the characters have to be to make it fit. Take K-On for example. No student in their right mind calls their teacher "sawa-chan", but Yui is a rather odd ball character so it becomes funny. Yeah, true that....

true,lol. Gaah,this was a weak chapter overall. Ah well, every writer has his bad day =/ Just remember that the more the reality is stretched for comedy the more outlandish the characters have to be to make it fit. Take K-On for example. No student in their right mind calls their teacher "sawa...

DanjaDoom, ROFL! It call it "Erotic Comedy". Like "Romantic Comedy" but more sexy. I thought people would just laugh at that scene but I guess I hit a sensitive spot for some people? Or maybe Hanako did? :lol: Edit: Since you all so appreciate it, I believe it's not the last we'...

DanjaDoom, ROFL! It call it "Erotic Comedy". Like "Romantic Comedy" but more sexy. I thought people would just laugh at that scene but I guess I hit a sensitive spot for some people? Or maybe Hanako did? :lol: Edit: Since you all so appreciate it, I believe it's not the last we'...

"Gooood. Let's uuuuuse this one then." I say as I walk over to Hisao, and with a sudden motion I jam the vibrator in his butt. I push it in further as Hisao shouts and bucks. It only penetrates for a few centimeters or so but it has an amazing effect. Hisao arches up his back and turns ar...

Daitengu wrote:

DanjaDoom wrote:

Mirage_GSM wrote:I do not thi k they would give foreign students harder english tests... What would be the purpose?

For me to make a joke...heh

might work better with a punchline from the teacher lol

true,lol. Gaah,this was a weak chapter overall. Ah well, every writer has his bad day =/

Mirage_GSM wrote:I do not thi k they would give foreign students harder english tests... What would be the purpose?

For me to make a joke...heh

Careful reading of the text provides numerous inconsistencies and plot holes; say, for example, Mr Aaron is elaborating on the way which he claims things "usually" happen in Yamaku even though he hasn't spent a week there. The literature club was downright bullshit, sorry. Yamaku seems to...

Hideaki is best trap