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by Ascended Flutist
Mon May 28, 2012 5:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 92317

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch2 up)

Fools ! Why have you unearthed this ? Some things are buried for a reason ! Ah well, I'll just edit this when the full chapter comes and answer you all now. Something I just noticed... Hisao, threatening the girl with the missing hand who hasn't yet come to terms with her disability with a knife is...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon May 28, 2012 4:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 59594

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

Welp, that was great. Liked how it went from 'Fluff and fun' to 'Fluff and drunk'. That was unexpected. :) Also, funny thing is, up until two weeks ago, I also had in mind a chapter involving our Favourite Crippled Trio to going to a Certain Nothern Summerhouse, and then I scratched it for...somethi...
by Ascended Flutist
Sun May 27, 2012 4:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 44667

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Five 5/26/12)

Very nice. I like how you chose not to pick a girl for Hisao. That's good. There are strong, if unavoidable, similarities with the Act 1 of KS, but you're doing a very good job of having your own, distinct style and your own, disctinct characters. Familiar yet different. That's also good. Definitely...
by Ascended Flutist
Sun May 27, 2012 3:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 25
Views: 9152

Re: Mirror, Mirror [Hanako] [Updated 5/26]

Oh my, there's more ! Most exciting !

I have no idea where this is going, if it's going anywhere, but I'm very interested. Great stuff, Doomish.
by Ascended Flutist
Sat May 26, 2012 3:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Three small stories.
Replies: 11
Views: 4041

Re: Three small stories.

First, Hello and welcome to the cozy little family ! Have a fishst- wrong forum. Have a...ah, band aid ? Yep, we'll go with that. Have a band aid. Not as good as duct tape, but it does the job. Second, I do like your minimalist narration a lot. Helps with the flow tremendously. Although, sometimes i...
by Ascended Flutist
Sat May 26, 2012 5:44 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Did we change?
Replies: 295
Views: 91508

Re: How Has Katawa Shoujo Changed You If it Has?

It made me a more tolerant and better understanding person.

Also, it took the white knight that was hogging my persona, stripped him, cut his balls, roasted them and made him eat them. It then transformed into a cosmic abomination and devoured him in a single gulp.

There was no mourning.
by Ascended Flutist
Sun May 20, 2012 1:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 44667

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Three 5/18/12)

This is definitely intriguing, though there is still little to comment on at this point. I'm enjoying it so far, looking forward for more. :)
by Ascended Flutist
Thu May 10, 2012 2:01 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What ending was the best for Hisao?
Replies: 83
Views: 27525

Re: What ending was the best for Hisao?

I can't tell if you're being deliberately obtuse or if you just misunderstood me completely. Mediocrity is comfortable. Why? It never asks more of you than you're willing to give. Growth requires a willingness to take risks and to break your suboptimal established patterns. Hisao/Shizune has the ma...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon May 07, 2012 2:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 44667

Re: KS: Bloodline

The prose is fluid, the character is intriguing for now, the family are unmitigated jerks and I can see them fueling at least some conflicts. There isn't much else to talk about really, but since this is just the introduction, it's to be expected. You have me interested for at least another chapter.
by Ascended Flutist
Fri May 04, 2012 3:53 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What ending was the best for Hisao?
Replies: 83
Views: 27525

Re: What ending was the best for Hisao?

I voted for Emi's. With all the running his health is in check (well at least it's better than in the other routes), he joins the Science Club and has apparently decided what he wants for his future, and has a healthy relationship (at least the good ending implies that) I agree. Emi's good end is t...
by Ascended Flutist
Tue May 01, 2012 5:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Convoluted toughts (Hanako, still)
Replies: 5
Views: 3300

Re: Convoluted toughts (Hanako, still)

I think I've pretty much laid it out in the thread that inspired this, but is there any specific point you'd like me to elaborate on? Nevermind what I said. You indeed expressed your thoughts thoroughly in that thread. I still stand with Guest Poster and other's view on the matter, though I certain...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Apr 30, 2012 1:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Convoluted toughts (Hanako, still)
Replies: 5
Views: 3300

Re: Convoluted toughts (Hanako, still)

It's plausible, sure, but I think you're not accounting for the depth of her psychological issues and making her far bolder than I expect. Maybe. But I don't think her issues are that severe, and I do think she made significant progress during her route, to the point where she indeed shows boldness...
by Ascended Flutist
Sun Apr 29, 2012 4:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Convoluted toughts (Hanako, still)
Replies: 5
Views: 3300

Convoluted toughts (Hanako, still)

'sup. So those are words, I guess you would call it a 'one shot'. They were sparked by this topic in which I lurked to help with my characterization of Hanako. Hanako couldn't stop fidgeting in her bed. She couldn't stop thinking about what Hisao did today. Today, Hisao unbuttoned his shirt in her r...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 123
Views: 92317

Free to Soar

Hi. Date chapter. I know. Must be at size limit so I'll keep this short. More down below. In the other post. Fluff. Humor. The not funny kind. Descriptions. Dinner. Movie. Drama? Also, SMUT . Delicious. Warning given. If you didn't read it, blame yourself. TABLE OF CONTENT _____________________ 1 - ...
by Ascended Flutist
Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:11 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Fighting about KS on Tera and other MMORPGS
Replies: 8
Views: 4459

Re: Fighting about KS on Tera and other MMORPGS

I'd actually laugh in utter bewilderment if I ever see a KS discussion in EVE Online. I can imagine the deranged dialogue : >"Anyone knows KS ?" >"Katawa Shoujo ?" >"yea" >"Dude I love it ! : D Who's your favorite ?" >"Hanako." >"Aw yeah man me ...